Reviews for beautiful S P L I N T E R
dragonrain618 chapter 7 . 2/22/2013
I loved it! It was so so good! Those last two lines made me want to cry because I instantly thought of Sasori's death when he fought Sakura and Chiyo ;x; I LOVED IT XD
ShadesofDeath chapter 7 . 3/25/2009
to me the last lines win me over, and you did it! Ding ding ding we have a winner. i really like this story.

ilkkuva chapter 7 . 11/22/2008


yeys dei-chan and sasori no danna!

yeys them!


AND I went to the mall today and bought the naruto manga when sai apears and the 1st voume of chibi vampire! Yay! I mean yey!
SaveADrumBangADrummer23 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Aw so cuteiful!
Mortalita chapter 7 . 7/29/2008
I couldn't review on the other chapters for one important reason. I could no stop reading. This was so beautiful and it made me cry. I can't wait to read the next one. Thank you so much
Annamia chapter 7 . 7/28/2008
aww, that was so good! it made me cry and then the tears turned to tears of joy at the sheer sweetness of the story. at least they both ended up all right and un-depressed.

Replicae chapter 7 . 7/22/2008

That was so cute! T.T

Thank you!
this be a dead account chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
I hate you. You're really not supposed to make me cry, not in public. D SO SWEET. x3 I LOVE IT SO MUCH. Sad but adorable all the way through! Awh, so beautiful. I'm sad it's over now. x3 LOVELY.
Jessy-Fran chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
Very nice. As a whole piece it flows rather well and there's a lot of symbolism that makes it a little deeper then the average fic on here. (I like symbolism) The chapter titles are interesting too!

Personally, I would say that Sasori was a little out-of-character but I get the feeling that really it wasn't about Sasori, it was about Deidara and his feelings. Besides it's fanfiction, you can write the character however the hell you want! (The OOCness was just my opinion.)

An interesting fic that made me think.

JayJay-Chan ~x
Lunari Sakana chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
so sweet and i am sad to see this story end but it was a good story u rite very well. cant wait to read other stories by u.
black55widow chapter 7 . 7/21/2008
this be a dead account chapter 6 . 7/19/2008
This made me cry. I hate you, you're not SUPPOSED to make me cry. D: It was so sweet and sad and brittle... awh, poor Sasori. Nuwait. STUPID SASORI DON'T FRICKING COMMIT SUICIDE YOU ASSTARD. D: WHAT AN IDIOT. Sad though. ilovvit. Moar plz? :D
black55widow chapter 6 . 7/18/2008
Very deep!
Lunari Sakana chapter 6 . 7/18/2008
very sweet and caring i like this story please keep writing
Crimson Cupcake chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
I'm so sorry about my last review D: I have no idea what happened...but what I was supposed to say was:

That was so cool! The ItaSaso part was kinda unexpected but played out really well. And Dei-kun is jealous...-coos- It was really awesome!
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