Reviews for A Promise to Be Better
Sleepy Snape chapter 1 . 8/29
*not real name, but you are FANTASTIC
All the fanfic is great!
But...a COMPUTER?!
Guest chapter 46 . 8/14
'Twas beautiful
Sue Clover chapter 10 . 7/19
Drs. Barnes and Beryl? I thought Beryl was a House Elf...
Also, I've been meaning to mention, but you seem to have a bit of a problem with erroneous punctuation, as well as other letters and symbols in random places. Might want to look into that. Or not, as it doesn't really distract from the story much.
Normally, I love Minnie, but in this story I am really pissed at her. I'm surprised Harry and Ron have been in it so little - they're always suspicious of Severus. But I suppose a week or two of decent treatment is proof enough for them, as well as the reports from other classes that he's being consistent. I'm proud of them. And him. Minerva and the other teachers just need an attitude adjustment.
Sue Clover chapter 4 . 7/19
Aaaah. You know, this story is not a part of my personal headcanon. Although I kind of wish it was. Maybe my headcanon includes something like this, but nearly to this extent. This is more like wish fulfillment. It just fills me with heartwarming fluffiness and feels about Snape and how Dumbledore cares about him and Snape cares about Dumbledore. That is the kind of fic I was looking for after all, because I was thinking about how he was doing it all for Lily, but through it all he gained respect for Dumbledore and started to care about him, and then had to kill him because he couldn't save him from that cursed ring, and all the while he had to pretend to be loyal to Voldy, and he's just been through so much, you know? And so while this story isn't quite realistic enough - I don't think Snape and Dumbles ever got quite that close because Severus would have kept it to a more professional level for his pride - it does good for my soul. So thanks.
daisycb chapter 26 . 2/3
I could just smack Dumbledore
daisycb chapter 20 . 2/3
This is why I like fanfiction better than the books. I like nice.
daisycb chapter 12 . 2/3
Healer Barnes is a great character. And it's wonderful Severus is getting the caring he hadn't really had before. I like the interactions with Neville and Hermione
tigerlily124 chapter 45 . 11/11/2014
I totally loved this! Favorites list!
ThisIsTheOnlyNameICouldPick chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
Akillise chapter 45 . 2/26/2014
I love your work! I really really love it! I'm Korean, and I was wondering, if I could translate your story and upload it on a Korean Fan Cafe(online). I'm not professional...but I really want them to know your good work. If you don't approve, I promise, I'll erase all of them. Thank you!
Guest chapter 45 . 2/16/2014
mworth1019 chapter 46 . 1/5/2014
Great story well done, joy to read. Thanks
Janet chapter 45 . 12/27/2013
I love your stories. I envy you your talent. This story is awesome. I coldn't put it down. Thank you for sharing this story.
Some guy chapter 34 . 12/13/2013
This story kinda sucks tbh. It's the same thing in every chapter: Snape sleeps, Snape becomes hysterical, Albus and/or Snape say something incredibly cheesy or sappy, and then Snape sleeps again. Frankly, I find it funny that Dumbledore and Barnes are constantly reminding Snape to get some much needed rest...when that's all that your version of Snape seems to do. That's the only thing I think I'm gonna remember about this story: It's the fic where Snape slept a shit load.
morgana-avalon chapter 45 . 6/19/2013

Since there is no way to send you a PM, I am doing here. I just want to tell you how much I loved the story; seeing a vulnerable, but at the same time so strong Severus. It even inspired me to write a sequel, in which Remus and Severus will get together. I won't post it anywhere of course. I would never trespass in that way. I just want to thank you for inspiring me. In the 15 years I have been writing that happened only twice before. So thanks for sharing and ever get inspired to add to your story please do!
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