Reviews for The Day Gaara Died
Guest chapter 4 . 10/19/2016
Wow that was one of the top best stories I have ever read amazing you have true talent Ariel your amazing words can't describe!
Guest chapter 3 . 10/19/2016
Love love love it so much sorry I forgot to review the last chapter but just know it was amazing the affection heart warming and fuzziness amazing to good! Your professional!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
I love your fan fictions they are absolutely amazing so well written words can't deprive it it's always so fuzzy and heart warming I love it I love it your stories all of them are amazing and I hope to read even more!
Yuu101cutie chapter 4 . 10/19/2015
I read all of the chapters in one go and loved it. Cute brotherly love all the way. I do agree that the two brothers are closer than with Temari. It was just CUTE!
Keep up the amazing work.
TheAngelofFate chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
Words can not describe how much I love this story!

I feel ashamed to know the fact until recently I had forgotten that Kunkuro and Gaara were brothers.

And also that I never took the time to read a fanfic about them, usually when I read a Naruto fanfic it's all about Itachi and Sasuke, cause though two are just adorable! But The Sandbros are the second just as lovely.

Please write more Gaara and Kankuro brotherly fanfics!
MTSP-t chapter 4 . 1/27/2014
This is an amazing story! I love it - it is so touching. I was nearly on the edge of tears! I am also writing a story about the Sand Siblings, so if it's OK with you... can I borrow this as inspiration for my own story? Thankyou for posting such a fantastic story. You are truly a brilliant writer.
Tonbokiri chapter 4 . 4/3/2013
This story touched me so much that I cried. I really respect an author who can convey that much emotion in a story.

Brilliant writing and continue making more!
Black Veil chapter 4 . 7/31/2011
I think I understand better now the relationship between brothers. Or just plain life. The love that pores out of the words fly straight to my heart.

And yes I admit it. I cried, because I want to be just like Kankuro.
ajunkboat chapter 2 . 6/18/2011
naaaaaw gaara!

im really glad you wrote this, i was always disappointed that gaara's recovery was never explored in the anime or manga, he is such an amazing character, so insightful, but so broken... and you just write him so well its great :)
ajunkboat chapter 1 . 6/18/2011
"all her body heat was seeking her heart in an attempt to warm it." i dont know why, but i absolutely love this line :)

really sweet story, loved the brotherly fluff at the end, gaara's such a sweetie xD
Ancilla Lunae chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
This is the best fic I've read in a very, very, very long time. I love Kankuro and Gaara. I almost believe that this really did happen. Congratulations on a masterpiece!
LienaGrace chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
I love stories where these two act like real brothers. I think I've read this one before, but I found it again. It's just as good as the first time.

One of my favorite parts is how Gaara actually calls Kankuro Nii-san and starts thinking of him like that. I loved their hug at the beginning too. You can tell these little actions mean so much to both of them. It's nice to see Gaara learning to rely on and trust his older brother.

Gaara's also learning a lot about family from him. I like that while he thinks back to Naruto, all of his thoughts aren't consumed by him, and he can look to other people for examples and things to appreciate and admire.

About chapters 278-281, what was different about the fan translation from the Shonen Jump version that you liked better? Were there any major changes in the dialogue?

Anyway, I really enjoy reading your Naruto stories. No one writes the sand siblings as well as you do.
NC chapter 4 . 12/10/2010
This is the best sand sibs story ever. I love how close you made Gaara and Kankuro. I'd love to see something like this between them in the anime and manga. At least they're getting more screen time in the manga right now but I wish it would show more of their relationship to each other like you have.
SilentTears2662 chapter 4 . 11/28/2010
Aww that was touching 3
Sue chapter 2 . 8/6/2010
Awwww...I love stories like this with Kankuroe comforting Garra...THERE NEED TO BE MORE!YOU ALLMOST MADE MY CRY DARNIT! :'(Well done, alltogetther, you did a very nice job. :)
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