Reviews for Deception
seasaltpuffs chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Call me dense, but I really didn't see that the ficcie would end /that way/. Oh, trolled reader here. :D Seriously, you've pretty much conveyed how fanfictions starring Mary Sues would turn out. In a lightly good way, though.

Nice touch with her crush on Taka-san. I don't often see that.
tuNGaw-GiRL chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
sad to say but it really got me..._

nice plot though...
Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
PHEW! Good ending!

This was well-written I liked it a lot. Not to mention the plot :D

Nasty Evil Dead Dog chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Awesome! one of Hiyoshi -shot-
love at third sight chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
You didn't fool me (read too many Sues to get fooled) but I am sure as heck that you will fool others.

On the other hand, the crush on Taka-san was... refreshing. :D

Bane-Dane chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I thought this was so sad until I got to the end. Dang it! She's a sue. But, none the less, I liked it.
Asian Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Haha. This was really sad..until I got to the ending...which I laughed at. Not very nice to laugh at 7:30 in the morning when everyone's sleeping. Haha. Nicely done.
ezyl chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
O.o...Oh, I get it now. That took a while. XD. I am slow.

~For Example
Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 7/2/2008

Somehow, I expected the ending to be somewhat like that. XD

Mary Sue's always have their ways, because they're just Mary Sues. Mehs. XD

Nice oneshot!