|Reviews for Deception|
| seasaltpuffs chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
Call me dense, but I really didn't see that the ficcie would end /that way/. Oh, trolled reader here. :D Seriously, you've pretty much conveyed how fanfictions starring Mary Sues would turn out. In a lightly good way, though.
Nice touch with her crush on Taka-san. I don't often see that.
| tuNGaw-GiRL chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
sad to say but it really got me..._
nice plot though...
| Peridot Tears chapter 1 . 7/26/2008
PHEW! Good ending!
This was well-written I liked it a lot. Not to mention the plot :D
| Nasty Evil Dead Dog chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
...do one of Hiyoshi -shot-
| love at third sight chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
You didn't fool me (read too many Sues to get fooled) but I am sure as heck that you will fool others.
On the other hand, the crush on Taka-san was... refreshing. :D
| Bane-Dane chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I thought this was so sad until I got to the end. Dang it! She's a sue. But, none the less, I liked it.
| Asian Tinkerbell chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Haha. This was really sad..until I got to the ending...which I laughed at. Not very nice to laugh at 7:30 in the morning when everyone's sleeping. Haha. Nicely done.
| ezyl chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
O.o...Oh, I get it now. That took a while. XD. I am slow.
| Apple Snapple chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Somehow, I expected the ending to be somewhat like that. XD
Mary Sue's always have their ways, because they're just Mary Sues. Mehs. XD