|Reviews for Critters Vs Gremlins: Desert Storm|
| Golden Gecko chapter 2 . 2/21/2012
Its short, simple, and to the point. I like it! I like it then a lot of other stuff on here. I don't read too much fan fiction but when I do, I like a story that is unique to the universe that it takes part in. I like original ideas.
Sure, I could point out that some of the characters are not as developed as they should be and that some of the action is far too fast but for a story like this, the pace is perfect. Who cares about some of the humans anyway, I want more stuff with the creatures and that is exactly what you produced here.
Not to mention, I can read a real flare in your writing. You seem to really care about this story and I hope to see more because this just seems like, if you'll pardon the pun, a ball of fun!
| Terminal10 chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
Here's an idea. When the Critters attack the town, Gizmo purposely spawns an army of gremlins to stopp them. PM me to tell me how you like it.
| Qille chapter 2 . 9/28/2011
Chapter 3 is on it's way? When?
(Critters scare me. I'm on Team Gremlins)
| Qille chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Yes, someone IS reading this and that same someone is wondering when you will update this next! I just saw all of the Critters movies (creepy little bastards) and I wanna see them get murdered by Gremlins! Whoo! Bring on the bloodlust!
| Mark chapter 2 . 1/8/2011
What happens next?
| darkcat52 chapter 2 . 8/23/2010
O-o more more please!
| Lep' In The Hood chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Dude! Plzz update! Love the story, need to hear more!
| bryan chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
dude... you didnt finish it! what the hell man? you had me all worked up with the title and then the story... come on dude.
| Wavefaith chapter 1 . 9/8/2009
It's very good, I like how descriptive you put it. I hope you make more
| cheetana chapter 2 . 11/11/2008
Oh dude, this is AWESOME! Please continue! D
| Ilteren chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Very good, I like your writing style. Hope you find a good way to bring the problem of sunlight against the gremlins, but for the critters, into the story. Please, R&R my story when you get the chance, nobody has reviewed it yet. I need some constructive criticism.