|Reviews for Running Late|
| NightShadow131 chapter 2 . 6/23/2013
Aw, poor Sammy! And Dean. We all know he wouldn't even begin to let go of his guilt for hurting Sam until he was recovered, and then it'd only be a start... Lol, and what are the odds of the Ira Smith not being the grave Bobby's lookin' for...? xD Geez. Tough luck. I also liked the explanation of Bobby's for why Sam had to be the one to distract Dean while he dug up the grave instead of doing it himself. Very fitting; not to mention realistic.
"Sam was asleep or unconscious, propped back against Dean's chest, his head half turned and tucked up under his brother's chin. Dean, wide awake, body tensed, eyes deadly, had one arm around his brother, keeping the injured man secure, safe. The other was holding a handgun, steady and aimed. Right at Bobby. [...] The arm holding the gun dropped, and Bobby suddenly wasn't so sure who was leaning on whom." Perfect. Just so damn perfect. Describes everything about them. At first when Dean woudln't give Sam the physical comfort that usually comes after injury, I was very sad for Sam, and frustrated at Dean. However, that would be very likely to happen, seeing as how Dean's full of guilt and blames himself for Sam's injuries. I'm very glad that he quickly got over it. Well, after Sam had a nasty bit of pain... ;-; And I loove how Sam tries to get through to Dean, trying to make him let go of his guilt, no matter the amount of pain he's in, and even if he's about to pass out.
Bantering at the end? Always a good way to go out. :D I like it when you have Bobby in the story as well, you always include him in the bantering and that's the way it should be. It was nice to have him have a little 'extra' role in this, if you will. Usually he's just there for comfort, or to help heal, which, I guess, is one in the same, lol. Great job again. :D
...I'm running out of stories. ;-;
| zekeschance chapter 2 . 9/13/2012
Just found this and loved it! You always do such an amazing job with the hurt Sam, protective Dean. Hope you'll still continue to post some stories about the boys now and then. Best of luck but don't forget us little people!
| JaniceC678 chapter 2 . 6/12/2012
Wow, just stumbled across this little gem! what a powerfully vivid story - Dean hurting Sam so badly and unable to stop it or control it? From the scene with the Impala to back at the house - having Dean come to be himself in the middle and then repossessed made it even better.
And I don't usually comment on single lines, but this one was just brilliant and went straight to my heart. "Dean's heart pounded. It was the rhythm of Sam's life, comforting in a way he could not explain or understand himself"
I just had to pause and read it several times before going on. That was a GREAT line.
| zeza101 chapter 2 . 8/4/2011
I dont know if you have noticed but I have recently been cloging up your inbox with fav story alerts, and now I'm finnally taking the time to review!
First of all I don't know if I should to love you or hate you right now... I had just recently got over my obsession with fanfiction from a couple other fandoms and I had actually started to have some free time to, you know, sleep and eat and all those other unneccesary tasks. But then I just had to turn on my tv at just the right time and ended up watching supernatural for the first time, an entire marathon of supernatural to be exact. And just like that, I was hooked. Then of course my over-active imagination started going 'well what if...?' and I went on and found one of your stories (behind closed doors)and loved it. But then of course that amazing story had to have a sequal, and then the sequal had a sequal and then I found more of your stories while looking for then next in the series...
Long story short I became obsessed with your stories [especially the hurt!sammy ones ;)] and then by extention supernatural fanfiction all together. And I have you and my stupid tv to blame... or thank... I'm not exactly sure yet.
Anyway, sorry for the supper long review, I just figured I had alot to make up for because of all those other stories I faved but didn't review :) you are an amazing writter and I absolutly love your stories! Now I'm off to stalk your profile some more until I have read all your awsome supernatural stories!
Keep on writting! You make my day!
| spnlittlebro chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Congratulations! You have been rec’ed at spn_littlebro on LiveJournal.
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| DeanIsTheMan chapter 2 . 11/25/2009
| LunaNigra chapter 2 . 10/25/2009
OMG, that's so Dean, always taking the guilt...
| Gohanzgirl chapter 2 . 9/16/2009
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
Limp!Sam and protective Dean... Damn, if there only were more of those..
| your knight in tinfoil armor chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
Oh Bobby... How I love you so
| SaintDogStreet chapter 2 . 3/5/2009
Absolutely wonderful. I really enjoyed this. The whole angsty-thing at the beginning, and then the delicious chick-flick moment and bit of humour at the end- it was great. Thanks for sharing, I really like your writing. I appreciate that you seem to put effort into it, it's just really nice to read something with little to nil spelling errors, and an interesting plot. And your Sam/Dean interaction is wonderful. Great job.
| Rachelly chapter 2 . 1/24/2009
I just loved this piece! It was so original, so incredibly intense, had limpSam/guilty Dean, beautiful hurt/comfort, and Bobby too! Poor Sammy really suffered and to have his torturer wearing his brother's body...was so creepy for me to read, and so hard for Sam to take. The car scene with Sammy being dragged behind it, then slammed into the trunk...gah!Your ghost hurting Sammy scenes were well done and creepy. I felt so badly for Dean too. To become aware of what he'd done to Sam with the car, then to lose himself again only to once again discover he'd tortured his little brother even more...
Loved the comfort Dean offered at the end, so attentive then pulling away feeling that maybe Sam wouldn't want him close after what he'd done and Sam's graciousness...needing Dean and needing him close and letting Dean know that. Loved both boys seeking comfort in each others' heartbeats.
And the tension with Bobby trying to burn the bones while Sam kept the ghost busy in his brother's body! Intense! Liked the twist that he got the wrong grave. I love Bobby's care of the brothers and enjoyed your humor at the end when Dean questioned Bobby as to what took so long in Dean's own special way!
| capjack54 chapter 2 . 10/26/2008
Very well done. Love the brotherly banter. Dean is sometimes hard to capture when he's afraid, because he tries not to show it. Nice to get inside his head for a change. And, as always, Sam-whumping is delightful... muy bien!
| Susan82 chapter 2 . 9/4/2008
“Wakey, wakey, eggs and bac’y, nap time’s over.” lol. You are so twisted.
Wow, you really beat up Sam good this time. Not since Most Cunning Prey (I hope that was the right title. Your story where Sam's cousin captures and tortures him) do I remember you going after him this badly. Yeah, good times. (Wow, am I sick or what!)
“Please, Moira,” Sam begged, “You don’t want to do this.”
Sam closed his eyes and let his head drop back down.
The belt struck. Cue Susan wincing. Damn good writing. Just another of many moments I find myself wishing I could see on film instead of just in my head.
Considering how badly Sam was hurt, I was surprised to find myself uttering, "Poor Dean!" The brothers both know that he wasn't responsible for his actions while being possessed by Moira, especially after the events in Asylum and the season 2 episode where Sam's possessed (can't recall the name). But that doesn't matter when he sees his little brother broken and bleeding, knowing that it was his hands that caused it. Bobby was right, recovery was going to be a bit*h, but they'll get through it. Both of them.
After so much angst, suspense, action, suspense, guilty protectiveness, and suspense, it felt great to end on a laugh. I love Bobby.
Wow, that was a fantastic, suspenseful story. Quick and to the point. And more than a bit inspiring, as I'm bogged down writing a bear of a story that I'm now thinking would be better if I just cut the crap and jumped to the good stuff. So, thanks for the unintentional help!
Sorry for rambling. I just can't help it. One day I'm going to submit a "Good job" review just for kicks. lol
To sum up...awesome! I loved it!
| Susan82 chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Damn, girl! You just jumped right into the action with a tied up, concussed Sam. Sigh. You know just how to make a girl happy.
First you have the Impala turn into a murderous KATT and try to flatten Sam, now a possessed Dean is using the Impala to kill him. You've got some Impala/Sam issues, my friend. Keep it up. )
And you brought Bobby into the story! Always a great move. I really enjoyed the quick intercuts between the Winchesters and Bobby, keeping the pace fast and furious (bad pun not intended).
Stop. Go. Wow, I just love the quick tense pace you've set in this story! It has my heart thumping. And, oh man! When Sam's beautiful face smashed into the trunk of the Impala...wow.
Just when I caught my breath and was enjoying some lovely Protective Dean moments...bam! The bit*h is back!
Wow, freakin' awesome start!