Reviews for The First Day
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 45 . 12/17/2014
There was some classic Ron reactions at the start of the chapter which I thoroughly enjoyed.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 44 . 12/17/2014
Fantastic.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 43 . 12/17/2014
Wow.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 42 . 12/17/2014
Stan's accent was spot-on too :)
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 41 . 12/17/2014
I felt that the exchange at the start was quite realistic.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 40 . 12/17/2014
The descriptive language you used in this chapter was excellent.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 39 . 12/17/2014
That was such a cute way to end the chapter.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 38 . 12/17/2014
"Kisses are part of the healing process" was by far my favourite line of this chapter.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 37 . 12/17/2014
As an Irish person, I was pleased that you did Sheamus' accent right.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 36 . 12/17/2014
I enjoyed the humour in the beginning immensely.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 35 . 12/17/2014
This was an example of some amazing writing.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 34 . 12/17/2014
This was such a sweet chapter and yet it wasn't nauseating. Good job!
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 33 . 12/17/2014
Awww!
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 32 . 12/17/2014
I like this story more and more with every passing chapter.
PixiePatronus13675 chapter 31 . 12/17/2014
I felt the chapter name was appropriate. It reminded me of the passage of time.
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