Reviews for The First Day
fandoms unite2000 chapter 4 . 4/17
oh god its so strange to be back in this world!
Guest chapter 55 . 4/14
I've been reading Harry Potter fanfic for over 15 years. Since before OOTP was released. I can claim quite confidentiality that I've read thousands of fics. Some were awful... just pure garbage, some were decent, and only a handful were truly amazing. This one is in those few amazing stories. There's so much good about this fic, your writing style is polished and thought out, your character development is excellent, you keep the characters in character (that's my biggest issue with subpar fanfic, insanely OC characters in a cannon environment.) And your story and plot development just makes it a pleasure to read. I haven't read your others fics yet, but I'm going to start them now. I know you haven't updated much lately, but i hope you get to see this review, I can count on one hand how many fanfics have made me cry, this one did at least 6 times... I think maybe more but I wasn't counting.
Lj.rs.hg.rh.tv chapter 55 . 4/10
This made me cry so much. I usually read next gen fan fictions or lily and James time Fanficton and this has changed my view of Harry Potter. I think you wrote everything just how it would have happened( except for the fact that I read somewhere that gorge and Angelina get together( although I like it this way)). You're an amazing writer and I hope you keep writing.

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Brookelyns34 chapter 55 . 4/3
This was awesome! Thank you so much!
joshuasalcido102296 chapter 34 . 4/1
BH
phoenixgward chapter 55 . 3/15
I've spent all my free time this past week [including reducing myself to 2 hours sleep before work twice] reading this. I've absolutely loved this story and it's been wonderful getting a look at their lives after the war. I think you really did well capturing the essence of the characters so it felt like it was really them and not some wishful thinking. They didn't feel like strangers who'd used Polyjuice to pose as the real deal. I'm going to look through your other writings for more, as I've been left with the deep sense of loss I usually encounter when finishing a great book, or after my latest reread of the series. Thank you so much for this look into their lives, dealing with their grief and moving on. It was, simply, amazing.
Dipti Sarawgi chapter 55 . 3/6
Im sure you have already gotten a lot of reviews, hopefully more positive ones than the negatives. But I just wanted to say that, this was amazing. After finishing the series, i just needed something else to properly give a closure to Harry Potter. And this is just it. The perfect closure, filling in the gaps that we all fell into over and over again. Thanks for writing it so beautifully. You are amazingly talented and i hope you go on writing this way. All the best! And thanks once again!
abutl2 chapter 36 . 2/14
The slut shaming in ch 36 is actually disgusting.
Soraya the All Speaker chapter 55 . 2/14
There aren't any words for how brilliant and completely poignant this story was - you captured each and every emotion perfectly, and the conclusion was just like coming full circle.

A wonderful, wonderful, wonderful fic.
abutl2 chapter 11 . 2/11
I was really enjoying the story until the slut shaming. That's why I hate the fandom. A bunch of immature girls who judge others for having sex. Ginny says what do you think I am as if she would be something awful for having sex with 2 guys. Ridiculous
jadesabre75 chapter 55 . 1/29
I really enjoyed this story. Just enough drama to keep it interesting and not enough to make me bawl like a baby. lol Thanks for sharing!
illjwamh chapter 55 . 1/25
Well, that only took three days. Totally worth it, though. How strange that I've never come across this before.

You handled the grief very well, I thought. Each character dealt with it in their own way, and took steps toward moving on at their own pace. Interestingly, I thought the relationship portrayed best was the non-canon one of George and Katie, though the others were done very well also.

Now I guess I have to find something else to read.
Natalie chapter 4 . 1/14
I don't know if I can read anymore of this due to my laptop's damage because of the amount of tears that have fallen upon it. Well done, well done.
Ntlpurpolia chapter 55 . 1/12
Beautiful ending!
Guest chapter 55 . 1/5
This was one of the most well written story i have read in a long time ! It was amazing !
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