Reviews for The First Day
omgiwantthisaccounttogoaway chapter 14 . 9/7/2008
haha! "ill be down in a minute" ahahahaha!
BB's girls chapter 13 . 9/6/2008
love this story. plz continue.

~kat
xxkaylaa chapter 13 . 9/1/2008
I LOVE THIS STORY! It made me cry too! Wonderful job!
Aqua Mage chapter 13 . 8/29/2008
Wow, this is amazing! I can't WAIT for more...
LILY R0SE chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
as usual that was awsome!
LILY R0SE chapter 9 . 8/27/2008
OMG! He's a part of the clock now!

that's awsome!

this deffinately makes up for the past couple of chapters! lol

finally some happiness!

-LaRay-
LILY R0SE chapter 8 . 8/27/2008
wow that was a tough one. . . i was literally in tears!

it's so sad :(
LILY R0SE chapter 4 . 8/27/2008
that was the absolute saddest thing i've ever read :(

i feel so bad for George

and i know i've said this before, I hate seeing Harry cry :(

I can't wait to read more! :)

-LaRay-
Severus my hero chapter 13 . 8/27/2008
Loved it, loved it, loved it. The last section concerning Harry and Ginny was so cute and sweet. I am glad that George is trying to deal with his problems too. He is trying to come to terms with his brother's death and trying to go back into the world. I hope that his meeting with Angelina will give him hope to carry on. It was this one character which really bothered me in the end as JKR did not really mention anything in the epilogue regarding him. Whatever she said in interviews is not as iron clad as what is written in the books therefore I felt that George needed attention.

Good Work!
nagus chapter 13 . 8/25/2008
Great chapter! I loved Harry and Ginny's night out. It was so sweet and tender. Granted it took a few stiff drinks to loosen them up, but it was still very romantic.
LILY R0SE chapter 2 . 8/25/2008
okay that scene with George and his stuffed dragon was so sad :(

Poor George! :( I feel so bad for him

-LaRay-
ladylace616 chapter 8 . 8/21/2008
Well /of course/ it needs chocolate! Chocolate makes everything better, Remus Lupin says so. The scene in the sitting room was so powerful. Imagining it made me cry so hard. Poor Harry.
MBP chapter 13 . 8/21/2008
Oh, there was so much to love about this chapter and the way the couples reestablished themselves. I loved Harry and Ginny, of course, but I loved George and Katie even more. I can't believe she couldn't understand why he hadn't talked to her. Trust me... I saw that one from a mile away. But I'm glad he told her. I hope you'll let us see him and Angelina, though... it's an important step for your readers, too, you know!

I loved the drunk Weasleys. You always wanted to write them, and even though you left Percy with his underwear in the proper place, that thing with his toes was HYSTERICAL.
MBP chapter 12 . 8/21/2008
You do know that I quote the Walrus all the time, right? (I'm sure that comes as a huge shock.) I loved this chapter so much... there's so much progress here for all of them - even though my breath caught too when George said that about "all of his brothers." I'm so excited I have another chapter awaiting me...
1025281 chapter 13 . 8/21/2008
this story is amazing!

hope to see an update soon!
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