Reviews for The First Day
kittycow2004 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
this is realyl good, and very realistic

i like it
MBP chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Oh, fine. I'm through with my temper tantrum... but only because this is AMAZING. Wow. I knew you'd had this in mind, but the way you brought the end of the book back to such vivid life makes me feel like I just read it all over again (and now I might just have to). Oh, poor Harry... you've made me absolutely ache for him here. This just flows so naturally from where DH left off. Can't WAIT for the next chapter, Lisa.
Loyd1957 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
You are just full of great story ideas. Can't wait for the finale of Making Mistakes. This particular story line is being done in multiples, but can't wait to see what your take is on it. Love the way it has started so far. I like to read your POV on these stories as they usually are how I would want to see them.
LauraWalden chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
very nice! can't wait for the rest of it... poor Harry. the guys needs to sleep for about a year.
adambrodylover chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
i love how ginny takes care of him. awesome start cant wait for more :)
Ale584 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I'm happy to see what are you writing about this moment of the story, I'm trying to write of this moment too... but I'm sure you'll do it better!

I can't wait! I hope you'll update sooner as possible!
puffindance chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This is good! Harry did not just have the battle to recover from but 7 years of fighting so no wonder he is in such a state when it is all over.
Respitini chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This is a happy thing indeed: one of my favorite authors taking on my favorite missing moment. Excellent beginning - very slow, no dramatic reunion makes things seem quite real. Lovely. *So* looking forward to reading this as it goes on.
5redroses chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
O, am I the first reviewer? Woot! I was so pleased to find an email in my inbox saying you'd started a new story, it really put a smile on my face. I have to say, you are truly great at getting under the skin of the characters, you make them come alive and this chapter seems to follow on so well from the book. Once small grammar point: did you man "cubby hole" rather than just "cubby" when you were talking about where the spare bedding was kept?

Dangling.Radishes chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I so glad you started a new story. Its very exciting, you know? I love stories that start straight from the end of the war, especially if they are cannon and well written, the latter i can tell it will be and the former i'm hoping it is or is close too!

Can't wait to see more, and more, and more of this!
dahilsaiyo chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I do not know how to describe my feelings... I just want to cry! Ah bless!
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