Reviews for The First Day
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 33 . 12/17/2014
Awww!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 32 . 12/17/2014
I like this story more and more with every passing chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 31 . 12/17/2014
I felt the chapter name was appropriate. It reminded me of the passage of time.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 30 . 12/17/2014
Nice.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 29 . 12/17/2014
I'm liking all the American references. I enjoy seeing how different cultures interact at Hogwarts.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 28 . 12/17/2014
Memories of Dobby's death are coming flooding back... I'm sniffling as I write this.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 27 . 12/17/2014
You did a good job with the accents in this chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 26 . 12/17/2014
Another wonderful piece.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 25 . 12/17/2014
I almost felt as though I was right there with them, meeting Ginny.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 24 . 12/17/2014
Great stuff.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 23 . 12/17/2014
I adored the flashback/dream.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 22 . 12/17/2014
Thanks for including a little bit about Teddy at the start. I know he's not a massive part of the story. However, I just think he's so cute!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 21 . 12/17/2014
Quite the revelation from George. Your dialogue in that department was quite masterful.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 20 . 12/17/2014
Another letter- what a nice way to end the chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 19 . 12/17/2014
Oh I love letters! I somehow find them easier to follow than dialogue.
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