|Reviews for The First Day|
| Guest chapter 55 . 7/31/2020
This story was fantastic! So well written I was enthralled from the start.
| dauntlessofthesea chapter 55 . 7/22/2020
Truthfully, one of the best fanfictions I have ever read. It’s really hard to tackle what happens immediately after a big event, especially if it’s the end of a story. You showed an incredible amount of insight and empathy in this story, the characters came alive, as we know them in the books. And you did almost all of them! I’m in awe, this was an amazing read, despite all the feels of the tragedy. If I have one reproach to make, it’s that you keep forgetting Lavender Brown also died in the battle of Hogwarts!
| Guest chapter 55 . 7/9/2020
Not sure how this story evaded me for so long... I can’t even put into words how amazing I found this story. Everything seemed to flow with such naturalness from scene to scene, but without ever becoming repetitive. You had me laughing and sad at the same time which is a feat some published authors haven’t mastered.
Hope you have written something else.
| SectionBering chapter 55 . 7/8/2020
What a read. It feels like THE perfect extended epilogue of the saga, the story we could only remotely guess behind the famous "All was well". Obviously it's not a book that Rowling could have written, because of the lack of real action and the over-representation of romance compared to the other books, but it continues the original ending so naturally I wouldn't be surprised if it was how JK imagined it. It is my headcanon now, and it will forever be. Bravo
| Adalmina chapter 55 . 7/6/2020
Wow. Thank you for this.
| padfoot aka izzy chapter 8 . 7/6/2020
why am i sobbing is it that i'm emotional or is everyone sobbing?
| monkeyteam chapter 4 . 7/6/2020
you are making me cry i am sobbing
| Guest1 chapter 54 . 6/29/2020
I love this story. So heart warming and lovely. I actually cried for a bit. You are an amazing author. Don't listen to the bullies they are just jealous. Keep writing I'm sure you will succeed!
| McHodges713 chapter 5 . 6/30/2020
Pretty good, but Lavender died in the battle of Hogwarts.
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/26/2020
You are a really good author. This story is so emotional to me I had to put the laptop down for a while. Well done!
| nemesis90 chapter 55 . 6/22/2020
I spent weeks getting through this and thoroughly enjoyed it.
By the 50th chapter, I realized I'd read this years ago already! and it was totally worth the re-read.
| Sandro chapter 55 . 6/19/2020
It wasn't quite what I expected, to be honest, but I am really happy that this was the case. I have never read something so mellow, personal, emotional and character-focused and thoroughly enjoyed every page. How the characters develop and settle into this new world all makes sense and feels natural.
As I pointed out before, your prose is awesome and I found myself quite a few times taking mental notes, trying to remember some clever writing to improve my own.
All in all, thank you for this story, it is rightfully one of the best Harry Potter fanfictions (according to some article) out there.
| Sandro chapter 4 . 6/18/2020
Man, this was gut wrenching. You really know how to pull heartstrings and write emotional without being melodramatic.
I also like the pictures you paint with your writing and how you use multiple sensory elements to describe stuff.
Even though I was on the verge of crying after that chapter I can't wait to see what the rest of your story is like with that good of a writing.
| Natalia chapter 55 . 6/15/2020
I have just read it all... it was amazing. As always a fling of sadness when the story ends but you prolonged it for the whole year! and it was really great, so thoughtful, so well-connected to the books, funny, charming, full of love, warmth, family...
| filipatanasovski87 chapter 10 . 6/16/2020
This fucking story made me cry my eyes out