It's great!giid job! Criticism? Too muc repitition of the book events like the trials nd basically alot of memories than any harrypotter fan wud remember. U could've used some but repeating them just in someone's words got a bit boring. You can say harry told her about the events that had unfolded after they went to godric hollow. And then ginny's reaction. Instead of writing it again. Also, let them have a moment when harry complimented hemione's book she cries but he end up saying something stupid like Ron would kill him. Of course they're happy tears Harry isn't lame. Everything isn't barmy. Just now i realized the problem. It was all dialogues. You didn't narrate the scenery or their feelings. Other than what they said. That xan be improved. But it was a one of the best fanfics not gonna lie 3

I really enjoy reading this fic. Thanks.

You can’t just slap the grief out of people. That’s really not how that works.

This is absolutely INCREDABLE... I’m Binge Reading this... WOW... Picks Up Perfectly after Book 7... JKR Could Have Wrote this... You are an AMAZING TALENT! And I Love Chocolate... ️️️️

It made me really emotional. I felt like crying while reading this.

That was beautiful. I don't know if you will read this. But you get them. Harry, Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Fred, George, Molly, Arthur, Luna, Dean, Percy, Bill. You get them.

holy cow... i LOVED this chapter... i mean, jesus.

This is one of my fave fics, i do have one problem tho. The Battle of Hogwarts was on 2nd May 1998, not in April 1999

omg so good I read it all and I love it.

you Made me cry in the First 4 chapters and i am mit Mad about ist

a wonderful Story

I don’t hate Ginny a lot, considering she is my HP crush, but the fucking *audacity* of her in this? She’s not a part of the golden trio. she shouldnt expect to be. her thinking she’s entitled to every bit of their lives, when she’s hardly been a part of their adventures is infuriating. like tf? who is harry going to turn to first? his best friends of a decade or his girlfriend of less than a year? like bloody hell she needs to get her head out of her ass and realize that just because she went through trauma, doesn’t mean she is a part of the golden trio.

You are a great storyteller! I couldn’t stop reading.

ew ew ew ew the thought of snivellus being harry's dad and *marrying lily* makes me violent

I love this too much.

There are so many fics Ive read were it doesnt touch base on the grief everyone experiences after the war. especially Harry. Harry is just this solid wall that moves on with his life. this is probably the first fic that I feel really portrays what I think Harry would have experienced after the war. This is so wonderfully written. although I hate cannon deaths (FRED T.T) This fic has be really emotional and teary eyed. when Molly gave Harry his birthday gift? nearly done me in.