Reviews for The First Day |
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kairi killed her chapter 9 . 12/20/2020 There are so many fics Ive read were it doesnt touch base on the grief everyone experiences after the war. especially Harry. Harry is just this solid wall that moves on with his life. this is probably the first fic that I feel really portrays what I think Harry would have experienced after the war. This is so wonderfully written. although I hate cannon deaths (FRED T.T) This fic has be really emotional and teary eyed. when Molly gave Harry his birthday gift? nearly done me in. |
muracochildren chapter 4 . 12/20/2020 im crying and i hate it great start though |
Ayesha chapter 55 . 12/6/2020 This might be one of the most beautiful pieces i've ever read...and i've read quite a lot. One of most touching even. You managed to reflect the hardships and aftermath of war in a beautiful way, as well as the thoughts and sentiments of characters without exaggerating them. I'll tell you, i love, love all the scenes of harry and teddy, that is just utterly adorable. Harry and ginny, all their scenes, their relationship...you did an amazing job. I love that u payed attention to all the characters, i love that you didnt focus on romance, i love that you didnt victimise the malfoys, i love the family, i love prof. Carter, i love teddy,i love the characters, i love katie's story; this is beautiful. You should be proud of yourself. I can easily see myself reading more of ur pieces in the future. I may also wish to add that i loved the first few chapters ...they might be my fav. You reflected the post-war effects and depression in such a tragically beautiful way. I love that there were friends and families to comfort each other and not just lovers. Dont give up on writing. You're doing an amazing job. Peace. P.s. I know i've already said it, but i love love love teddy. Thank youfor all the scenes of him and harry. |
Ayesha chapter 4 . 12/4/2020 4 chaps in and ive already cried twice |
Em chapter 55 . 12/2/2020 I don't know if you still check this platform but I just wanted to say what an absolutely incredible story this has been to read. You make such nuanced observations about the characters, their insecurities, vices, faults and write as if they were your own. The way you write is so deeply emotive- I'm not ashamed to say I have shed more than a few tears whilst reading, especially this last chapter. I especially admire the way you have portrayed the developing relationships between the characters. Thank you for this gift of a story- I'm sure I will be re-reading it for many years to come. |
Gina chapter 55 . 11/29/2020 Thank you, so much, for writing this story! I enjoyed it so much. I've always wondered what life would be like for these characters after the battle and the fall of Voldemort. I think you brought such lovely humanity to all these characters in how they dealt with life in the after times. It was such a delight to let myself get both lost in the story but also see myself in the relatable grief and pain you portrayed. Thank you! |
DaveC chapter 51 . 11/22/2020 I may have missed it but I thought Harry had bags of money and places to live and a lordship to boot? I’m a little disappointed by ot too much. |
Aanya chapter 2 . 11/19/2020 I am in freaking tears |
jadetraveller chapter 14 . 11/5/2020 I think this chapter has several unfinished sentences in it |
Crazy-Little-Hippo chapter 1 . 11/3/2020 This is one of my all time favourite series, I’ve lost count of how many times I’ve reread it. You’ve built such a great ‘world’, and quite frankly, I prefer yours to the Official Pottermore stuff. Do you have any plans to one day republish the series in chronological orderwhere all the little side stories fit in to this and so on and so forth? Because that would beyond amazing And finally, thank you for doing what you do |
poetchickee chapter 55 . 10/30/2020 I think that was the best fan fic I ever read. I kinda wanted one more chapter about Katie telling George and Harry proposing to Ginny. But I love that you did exactly 1 year. Again, best fic ever. |
em8 chapter 1 . 9/6/2020 This was amazing. I cried and laughed so much and have not stopped thinking about this amazing work! |
IHateSnakes chapter 55 . 9/8/2020 Wonderful! You should be proud of a superb work. |
IHateSnakes chapter 25 . 9/5/2020 Superb story. One of the best I've ever read. |
Guest chapter 55 . 9/2/2020 This is soooo good. The entire fic is perfect. It is what I needed to give an end to the book, to understand the war. PTSD is brilliant. Thank you for writing such a wonderful piece. |