|Reviews for The Unspoken|
| wolfstars chapter 1 . 10/6/2016
I think I liked every line, but "I'm sorry" really struck a cord with me. A brilliant fic.
| wish we could delete accounts chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
This was heart-wrenchingly beautiful, especially the "I'm sorry" one. Wow.
| cindylili chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
My favorite part has to be "I'm sorry". But this whole story was great :)
| Constellations chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
Honestly! Poor Sirius. Poor Regulus. Poor Remus. Poor James. Poor Lily.
The first three had such sad lives... And the other two were never given the chance to truly live.
You're an amazing writer you know that? :D
| Kaierufhsk chapter 1 . 9/27/2014
I think the saddest parts were the i love you and I'm jealous
| pirat chapter 1 . 2/13/2014
Wow… just - wow. Such a wonderful, profound, sad and unique story. Well-written. Love it. Thanks!
| Prince of Ice chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
"He wanted to tell him to be like James." was my favorite line.
I also liked the part where Remus forgives Sirius and accepts his apology without words. The family hug is a nice touch too.
Just if you're wondering; it flowed quite well too. I didn't spot any grammar mistakes either. Good job and keep up the good work!
| footballprincess chapter 1 . 7/18/2013
I liked Bella yelling at him about the spider, and the never saying I'm sorry part.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 5/20/2013
Sirius being scared. It's sad, and really touches me to think of a 5 year old Sirius like that... This whole story is very realistic, and to think off James described the way Sirius says, well, it makes me want to tell him of how it all ends. I really don't think of James as a human being in the books, and Sirus seems awesome, so Sirius saying James is the one who we should strive to be like... Thanks for this story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
THIS BROKE MY HEART
| nessieblackfan chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
This was good.
| LoveTheBlacks chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
I loved this story great job you are a wonderful writter as for my favorite lines I loved a lot of them but the one I loved the most was -to me- the line that sumed up the whole story the one that made you cry:
-He hated having regrets.
| Forever Siriusly Sirius chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
Awww this was kind of bittersweet. I think my favourite part was the 'I love you part'. I think these lines really work with Sirius s character,cut makes sense that hed never say I love you, or I mscared or jealous or anything. It was perfect :)
| HP-Lette-Fan chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
I liked the whole story, but my favorite part was the jealousy section.
| jeanblake4530 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This was just beautiful, you are one of the few persons who write sirius like I think he really is. My favourite part was "I am scared" and I loveed the last part of it.