Reviews for Arwen's Poem
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
I think this poem was well-written in a way that told Arwen's story and the fate she chose, to be at Aragorn's side.

I found a grammatical error in the fifth line. My suggestion would be to take the word "that" out from the line, for the sake of making the line flow better. This is your choice, since you're the one who wrote this poem.

Otherwise, I thought this poem was sad yet good at the same time. Good work.

-Aria Breuer
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
I like this poem. It's really sad. I do hope that the memories give her great comfort short as they will be for her.