Reviews for OOPS, There Goes My Shirt
bs18edwardz1truluv chapter 10 . 8/10/2009
I really love your story! I love the plot and everything. And may I just say that you do a really good job making sure that there aren't a ton of grammar errors! I love that!

Keep it up and post another chapter really soon!
WardenAmyBee chapter 10 . 8/5/2009
This is amazing im totally hooked!Cant wait to see what happens
Ficfanatic396 chapter 10 . 8/2/2009
hipstaharry chapter 10 . 7/30/2009
og im so nervous update soon plz! im lik dying here!
Rose chapter 10 . 7/21/2009

they have to be ok!

why the cliff hanger why?

i need to know what happens next!

wow im totally addicted to this story now. ;)
Rose chapter 9 . 7/21/2009
aw that was so sweet!

i hope jacob doesnt come and ruin everything.

but i thought he got a ring for her from tiffany's.

does she hav 2 engagement rings on now?
Rose chapter 8 . 7/21/2009
lol i thought it was funny when carlisle told emmett to make chicken! :)
Rose chapter 7 . 7/21/2009
i love the name cecilia. :)

its cute. they could call her ce-ce :D


pilot inspektor is the most horrible name ever!

i feel so bad for the kid.

all the other kids are gonna make fun of him 4 da rest of his life.

i mean imagine trying 2 get a job with that name.

the boss would think its a joke or something.
Rose chapter 6 . 7/21/2009
haha i thought it was so funny how the dogs names are tanya and laurent!

and i liked how you referred to twilight when bella said she would "sell her soul to be with him" or something like that.

and i bet its either edward or alice behind her when she screamed out that she loved edward.
Rose chapter 5 . 7/21/2009
they're having twins!


i guessed it as soon as carlisle started talking to the nurse!

0H MY G0D!



they're 18 and theyre gona hav twins and they still hav 2 go to college. wow thats gotta be hard.
Rose chapter 4 . 7/21/2009
aw he brought her flowers!

they are so cute together!

and so in love already!
Rose chapter 3 . 7/21/2009
aw thats so sweet!

he wants to be the "best dad ever" :)

i love edward!

lol. he's so sweet. :)

love the story by the way.

ur a really good writer!

keep up the good work.
Rose chapter 2 . 7/21/2009
i hated alice at first when she decided to just start calling da parents without talking to bella.

but i kinda forgave her afterwards.

this story is really interesting .

i cant wait to see what happens next!

will she name her baby piper or logan?
cb chapter 10 . 7/18/2009
O!M!G! Please post more soon, i really MUST know the outcome i am on the edge of my saet in anticpaition of what will happen next! Does Edward call his family? Does he call Bella's family? Does Bella make it out all right? Do the twins survive? OMG! The suspens is killing me please please post more really REALLY soon...
MissEbullition chapter 10 . 7/15/2009
omg omg omg please for the love of christ update - i think i might be dieing of suspense! great story btw :)
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