Reviews for Intelligent Conversation
Natasha chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Wow, I can't believe how good this is, it really captures Mayuri trying to overcome Urahara's shadow.
Awesome, simply awesome.
Vibrant Spectrum chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Nice story. Surprising that it's been placed under friendship, but I suppose there's not much you can label this kind of relationship.

I can relate to Mayuri, and it sounds like you could too, as you were writing this. Were you in a rivalry of sorts yourself?

Anyway, good plot, good flow, good grammar, etc.

Keep writing!
Sailor GaOn Donut chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
cool
The return of PP chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
Very brilliant. Very Mayuri.
Jiggary chapter 1 . 6/26/2009
Awe, he misses Urahara already? Well, I have one thing to write...Mayuri-chan is totally the hottest man ever (And I literally mean his human form) I just enjoy his sarcasms.
staidwaters chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
freaky but believable...
MastaDrumma22 chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
Damn! Nice. Um... I think you played Urahara in just a little positive light, just a tiny bit, but it was an awesome read.
MazokuTenshi chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Love it. It's so nice, and I loved how Mayuri nkew that Urahara wasn't a traitor. Awesome job!
WinterVines chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Well, there are days when I feel bad for Mayuri and days that I just outright hate him, but this is one of those days that I can tolerate him. I guess there could be a method behind the madness in his case. Your ending sentences really wrap up your stories nicely. Now I'm going to be stuck on Mayuri all day XD. Thanks for sharing! -KG
QuinnAstaire chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Wow. That was freaking awesome! I love Mayuri's character and that need he has to improve himself to be the best that he can be. It would be cool if you did Urahara's own feelings on Mayuri and how he sees himself compared to the other x