Reviews for Love Affair
Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
WHAAAAT you never finished! Sad! This was good!
Azurii chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
The first chapter just makes me think that this is a promising story to come, that is if it does come.

I like to believe that they are in character but since we don't know that much about them you probably wouldn't be able to tell that well, but yet they are two of my favorites. I really do like how you didn't make Kankuro just spill about who he is, like he just wants to be liked for him instead of his name.

The whole inner thing works quite well, but that could because it was broken and she just said everything out loud which made it quite funny.

I do hope that you continue this, you did say your updating schedule is unknown, so I'm going to think your just busy and soon you will update.
cozieatbrains chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Wow... This is just.. Good. You write really well. The plot is very interesting. Please do cOntinue :)
Skyrere chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
awwww... kank is so suave and debonair. LOL
I love it.
more please.
Armads the Doom Bringer chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Hm. How do I sum up my thoughts about this?


Yeah, that basically sums this up. This is remarkably well written, and very well paced. It was a bit light when it came to realizations of consequences, but this is still the first chapter, and a story of inebriation, so i'll let it slide. But, this is an amazing story, and I loved it from beginning to end. I eagerly await more of this.
Barunka chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
Whooo, that's diabolical. Kankuro is.. so.. gallant! And they're both funny, I appreciate that English is not my 1st language and it's kinda late in my country so I'm like "aaaawwwwww" and nothing more, so I'm sorry for a lack of proper and pretty words. But I can say I freakin' like it!
Astrovide chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
This is so adorable. I really like what you're doing so far, with Kankuro not coming out and announcing he's Gaara's brother. It makes the story so interesting because right now when Tenten and him are together, they can be themselves and not ninjas. Haha. I love everything that Kankuro has said; every word from his mouth was gold. He's so hot. Keep it up!
foxglovephoenix chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Any chance of you continuing...I really enjoyed your work...
yellow eyes chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Wow, I really like this story. Your other naruto fanfiction too! Anyway, please continue writing it :)
yellow eyes chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
Wow, I really like this story. Your other naruto fanfiction too! Anyway, please continue writing it :)
killerkumquat chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Normally I don't pay that much attention to crack pairings like this, but I felt like branching out and getting used to multi-shipping. That said, this will be an excellent fic for broadening my horizons - because so far it's an excellent fic period. Nice work! I look forward to seeing how this plays out.
DeviousxXxSmile chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
I loved it

The characterization was nice, the plot works and the writing is good. Please update soon!
Blood Stained Sorceress chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
I like!
icyvfrost chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Where is the rest? I think you need to finish this story and not leave me hanging like this. COME ON!
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
Why would anyone want to kill you for giving Tenten an inner Tenten? She's funny, especially when Tenten is drunk and inner Tenten starts talking without her knowledge. tehe.

Okay, it's official. I love your writing. Your fics, as far as I can tell, are the best Tenten/Kankuro's on ff and that just makes me giddy all over. (Well that and the fact that neither of them know who the other is yet.)

Please, please, PLEASE continue this soon-though from how long it's been since it's been updated, that's probably unlikely. But you literally have me on the edge of my computer chair because I just love these two characters-together and separately-and I love the way you write them; now don't you feel the need to continue even a little bit? Real life gets in the way of things, though so I understand if you decide not to finish it. Besides, it can sort of stand alone as a one-shot-a cliffhanging one-shot that leaves you wanting more-but a one-shot none the less.

In case I haven't told you before now, wonderful fic, btw. Thank you so much for writing it and I find that I'm rambling so I will stop now. :D
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