Reviews for Perfectly Hollow
PandoraIsn'tBoxed chapter 1 . 7/18/2020
Came back here after years and this is just as good as I recall. Good work. Tragic, but incredibly pleasing to read.
pineapple chapter 1 . 1/6/2020
you described an ache i always had but couldn’t put into words. you raised it into my conscious awareness
Help chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
God...this is so tragically sad
Rantaki chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
Wow that really makes you wonder how it would be if they’ve never met. Light would just continue being the oh so perfect human he is and solve cases. Maybe he would find a case that’s interesting, maybe he wouldn’t. It’s odd thinking of L growing old, because in a way with his reputation and career, it’s both hard and easy to die.
Great story, I love it :D
Seprith Li Castia chapter 1 . 8/14/2019
Been a long time, since I last saw this. Death Note is one of the hardest series to write for because it requires a balancing act of dubious morality, brilliant characters as the normal, and evocative writing.

I think you have captured both Light and L perfectly; especially the latter. Both can be defined by their desires to push themselves, to truly test their skills, and do something. Their only difference is that Light believed he could do more for the world while L just wanted to solve puzzles.

This story... of a world without Kira, shows how much emptier they would be. L never gets his ultimate case and is left wanting and Light... Light gives up on life. I like how you had him try to find something; from becoming a master chef to even thrill seeking by falsifying evidence, but none of it could mean anything. That sort of emptiness, that hollowness, fits Light very well.
Fan chapter 1 . 6/15/2019
Namjoon… stop cutting onions.
InsaneRabbit chapter 1 . 8/30/2018
"If I die, who will remember me? Who will mourn me? Who will care?" That thought goes through my head nearly every day. And each time, no one is the answer. That's why this hit home for me. You took an idea that was so simple, and executed it in a blunt way that inspires so many complicated emotions. To see two people that I know become so lifeless is truly terrible. You described depression so accurately that it's scary.
LalaSpade chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
I was not ready for this. This made me feel hollow, you have some beautiful writing skills. Thank you the intense read.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2018
Whhyyyyyyyyy? This is so freaking depressing, I just...cannot do this.
Just why?
A writing skills though
Kloness chapter 1 . 11/24/2017
Can yo write a one shot of light and L meeting, cause this gives me the feels.
Dbzgirl1011 chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
LiteratureGirl12 chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
I'm really fucking depressed now but on a side note now I want to throw a vase at a wall to see how it breaks.
accountorphaned chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
This is a piece that changes the universe drastically. I never considered them not to meet- like, damn. Amazing job.
Deativatethisaccountpls chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
Yikes. This was too good. I don't know how to feel now, XD
Wonderful job!
Dante Morose chapter 1 . 3/30/2017
Your fanfictions are my favorite look into the minds of villains. Your perception of them is as incredible as it is fascinating. How? How do you do it? These beautiful words you string together make me see things from their perspective - perfectly - and leave me with a chill of understanding.

This skill in your writing always leaves me in awe, and I wish I could write like you.

You are amazing. Wherever you are, keep writing.
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