|Reviews for The Clock|
| Cocoalata chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
Sally was gone, nothing but a pink coffin and old lolly sticks in the bin.
I hope angels laugh.
Will it make me pure?
You wish that every song was a second longer...
Those were the sentences in your story that I loved the most.
But frankly, I loved most of it.
Like how you don't need so many words, even though I'm usually in for the long complicated sentences. It describes JD's POV perfectly here.
And you scared me too, because hell, that's exactly how those voices are. You think you know what they are, and then they change, and you think they're still what they used to be and you obey. And it kills you.
Probably the best part: The "I am" bit. I don't even know why, it was just perfect xD
I don't even really have any real criticism... Except a few typing mistakes, but that's all.
| Renn chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Phew! I'm glad you said 'parallel' to Countdown! So sad! haha sorry it's late and I should get to bed instead of reading more fics and leaving weird reviews!
| Sad.Whisper chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
loved it. it's one of the most fics i've ever read.
i got addicted to this couple thanks to u xD
ok, hope to c you soon :3
| zunmo chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
That was very interesting... innovative way to set it up, juxtaposing thoughts, what was happening, and the clock theme. I really enjoyed that :] Not just as a fanfic, as a story.
| phantomviola chapter 1 . 10/7/2008
Really nice, I love the waw you brought it full circle.
| previouslysane chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
the strangest thing, i've got someone just like faith, exept his name is Jay. I'm glad that I'm not as crazy as i think. XD thank you.
| Hmob1994 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
but... but... *Bottom lip wobbles* WHAT DOES EVERYONE HAVE AGAINST JD?
I've read about 5 stories where he dies, 2 where he's beaten up, about 20 where he ends up self-harming himself...
(P.S., this is a really good story, no matter how sad it makes me!)
| L chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
the last two lines are especially brilliant.
| sissysage3000 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
OMG I loved it!
| wolfbane17 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
beautiful well written and more than my dose of angst. can't wait to read more of countdown.
| daflippnay chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Wow. I'm in awe.
This was a wonderful theme, and you really did a good job of it. I loved your metaphors, too.
| deleted839261 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Cripes... what a dark place your head is.
This is so... depressing... more depressing than Countdown even. Really dark and twisted.
But bizarrely good. Awesome writing, good plot. Just wished it happened to someone else.
| TheAkatsukiiscoming chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Wow, that was really good! I love the end, where JD truly dies when the clock stops, and how right after, a baby is born. Great imagery/symbolism, and all that jazz. Way to go!
| Shrink To Be chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Oh well done you've managed to make me cry!
That only means that your fic was amazingly brilliant (i wasn't crying out of boredom that's for sure...)
I liked Faith, but I'm glad Doctor Cox came to the rescue :-) The ending was so sad and wonderful... sigh...
Now, chapter 3 of Countdown wants to be written (it told me so...) :-)
| VannHazel chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Ah, i'm crying, ya big jerk...
You yell at everybody else when they kill somebody off, but you go ahead and do it yourself!
LOL Great story, horribly sad but awesomely written and great descriptions!