Reviews for Spiral Static
celajwhitney chapter 8 . 5/3/2021
Edward really is very young isn't he?
celajwhitney chapter 3 . 5/2/2021
Jesstew chapter 10 . 4/20/2021
amazing story and writing
StarDustRiley chapter 8 . 10/25/2020
Just thought you should know, this is one of my favorite re reads.
Justme chapter 9 . 11/29/2019
Great story, I enjoyed it a lot!
Guest chapter 3 . 1/25/2019
Bella is the worst...she comes off as such a brat
Danielle Pitter chapter 9 . 11/10/2017
Edward is SOO not 90210 Luke Perry Hair. Oh NOO. Not even. Nope. You can’t make me. NOOPE. Sorry lol.
Danielle Pitter chapter 8 . 11/10/2017
I truly don’t understand what. Edwards. Problem. Is. Isn’t it bad enough he forced B to marry him for sex but worse when he’d already agreed to change her if they did marry?! I mean how long did he think they’d keep this up and keep Volturi in the dark? They didn’t travel to Italy but come on. Edward needs to grow TF up and realize that time. Is. Ticking! The pool scene at the end was cute tho lol.
jk chapter 3 . 7/18/2016
is bella really that stupid? Shit do you even realize how just plain dumb you've made her character? First off, if you have to beg and plead for your man to sleep with you...LOL maybe hes just not that into you. Second, Edward cleary stated that alice saw their plane crashing just because they were on it. Without them on it, it doesn't crash. So gee bella I wonder what could make the plane crash? It couldn't possibly be a super strong vampire could it? Edward says "you don't want me to rip a whole in the side of the plane do you?" And ...with that comment...still nothing clicks for her? She STILL pushes him to allow her to give him a hand job?
Shes just so incredibly fucking stupid, its amazing. She risked the lives of everyone on that plane why? Because shes a selfish stupid little bitch?
jk chapter 3 . 6/12/2016
bella brought her HOLEY ORANGE SHIRT on her honeymoon? seriously?
vampbirch chapter 3 . 1/7/2016
Omg this is so good. I'm way late to the party here but I love this!
KrispyFree chapter 9 . 11/9/2015
You have talent. That was a wonderful, fun and tear jerking ride.(tears of joy, of fear and just tears) Thank you for sharing your vision of my favorite characters with the world.

I forgot to check the dates of publishing so if it's old I hope you're still writing but if it's recent, get busy with a new one!

Chive on!
Guest chapter 9 . 4/29/2015
Rereading. Still good second time around
twiclare chapter 9 . 4/14/2015
This was very different!
twiclare chapter 6 . 4/14/2015
So he wasn't just being grumpy after all!
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