Reviews for Harlan's Day Out
TitoMan chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Luv the story it was very well written
Michael Jackson chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
Wow, good story it was funny to. Poor Harlan though 2 inches too short.
I loved it "I sounded convincing didn't I? XD XD :)
Ponchygirl chapter 1 . 10/1/2015
I love this story, it was super cool!:) Ponch was being sooooooooo sweet.
I think its cool Harlan got to be a CHP for a day.
Mylee chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Way to go, Ponch! That was a great present for Harlan...too funny! It's so sad about his two inches...poor guy! But awful nice of Ponch and the others to help him out, even for just a little bit. Nice!
Gabe B chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Great story! I loved it.

But, oh man! Is Ponch gonna ever get in trouble for this! I don't even want to THINK about what Getraer's reaction is going to be when he finds out. LOL
DaynaWayna chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Aw! Ponch has a heart of gold! How sweet that was! Yay for Harlan! LOL

I had to laugh at how you put his uniform together... since you had him using Kathy's boots, why not BRUCE'S uniform? You have the man in a woman's uniform! ROFLMBO! Poor Harlan! :)

It was an awesome little story for that challenge. You are very creative and you write our boys very well. My favorite thing tho: hearing Ponch say "I reckon." ::giggles:: Here in the US, that is a very 'country' or 'Southern' thing to say. Yes, it's very Aussie too, but... it just cracks me up to hear him say that.