Reviews for Elephants
Guest chapter 2 . 9/6/2013
Raven is a bitch
Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
Wow. Okay, it's nice to have some more information on what actually happened. Nice chapter. _
Zulu2121 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Awesome. You made me hate Raven and want to cry. I don't think she'd do that, but you never know, eh? Love the writing, absolutely fantastic.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
Whoa. Very good job on Rae's POV.

Keep the good writing.
Cicero Amaral chapter 2 . 7/8/2008
There are any new chapters/sequels coming?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
This was really good! Short, but you did a very good job of getting in Gar's head and getting his emotions down on the page. I was really feeling for him by the last few lines...yikes. My only complaint? You need to write another chapter to this. Maybe from Raven's POV? Keep up the good work.
Raven'sWinterRaine chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Wow, that was sad. But good job. What was the story that made you think of this?
Mellowyellow11 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Though provoking, keep up the good work.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Poor BB; great job on his thoughts.

Keep the good writing.
IGAF-kun chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Not bad. I liked it. Keep up the good work.