|Reviews for A 'Little' Respect|
| lunar locket chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
.. so why are there no more chapters?
| RISING FLURRY chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
Haha this is funny. Whens the next chapter coming out?
| Rowana1 chapter 2 . 5/15/2010
WHAT? I did NOT have things in common with a straw! I Liked it! ?
| Zexion14 chapter 2 . 2/18/2009
This is really good.
| JesusRox7111 chapter 2 . 12/29/2008
I like the idea, and I loved Roxas's innocence -
You seem to have a lot of run-on sentences, though. for example
-All those thought were shattered when the baby started crying again, she had been silent for about fifteen minutes then there was nothing but screams in the air, Roxas jumped about a foot in the air surprised, than ran over to the box.
The first and second comma probably should've been replaced with periods, for instance, and there should've been an 'and' between minutes and then.
Also, try not to use AN's. i hear they break the continuity of the story (If I used those words right -'). If you have something to say, say it before or after the chap (like where you put your note in bold in the beginning). You could even use asterisks, if you want (If I used that word right, too -' I suck at vocab :P)
Can't wait for the next update, and I hope I gave a good review -
| K.C. Raven chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
this is different
| Crazysnakelover chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Hey cuz, never seen you do humor before, this should be interesting