|Reviews for My Brother's Best Friend|
| Muff'Nbutter chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
"Edward forgot that the Swans used food for superlative descriptions"
"'I didn’t know you had a problem keeping your clothes on,' he said.
Bella licked her lips before she said, 'And you seem intent on keeping my clothes off.'"
"She gets a little. . . aggressive when she's had too much to drink."
"'What did you say to her?'
'I told her I'd tuck her in'"
"'And then I hosed down the patio furniture.'
Rosalie giggled. 'That sounds exciting.'"
"Edward entered the kitchen. His hair was tousled and his t-shirt was wrinkled. He had an expression of a man who had just been tested to his limits."
nice chapter, dearie... please update soon!
| loveisms chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
Wow this was such a great chapter, thank you for posting such a long one! I love this story so much. I was so embarrassed for Bella when Edward saw her, eek! I also feel really bad for poor Jacob. I hope things between Bella and Edward pick up soon. Keep up the great work!
| claddaugh128 chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
aww! emmett and rosalie! they were so cute.
and edward is, of course, hot as always. can't wait for the next update!
| book-aholic17 chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
i just started reading this story a couple of days ago, and loved it.
im really curious about why edward left like that.
and this last chapter isn't one of the better ones.
but probably only because jacob was in it.
if you didn't know already, im a jacobhater!
ew, she smooched jacob.
i say that whenever she kisses jacob in any story i read.
and drunk bella is always funny.
ooh. and i liked rosalie in this.
i thought she was going to be a bitch, since the conffession bella made to edward about rosalie being superficioul.. sorry i do not know how to spell.
i LOVE that your updates are like a million pages long.
makes the story all the better.
| KanbiAme chapter 3 . 7/24/2008
Your writing style is beautiful! Everything seems to flow together and I can't stop reading.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so excited to see how this plays out!
| EbonyHearts chapter 3 . 7/24/2008
teeheehee! i love this story! is fantastic...
dang... i really wanted to put an evil laugh in this...
update and... uh, soon..please!
| rat-de-bibliotheque chapter 3 . 7/23/2008
Ooh, my heart was fluttering. I like the way this everything seems to be falling into place. I'm wondering though, Rosalie seems pretty cool in this chapter. Why does Bella have such a bad opinion of her?
| Skiiller chapter 3 . 7/22/2008
Very good, update soon, can't wait!
| FOREVER WITH MY NOSE IN A BOOK chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
more more more
| LIVExLAUGHxLOVE chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
I love how well written this story is! I hope you update soon. You really get into the minds of the characters and I like your style of writing. Please update soon!
| TwilightFan104 chapter 3 . 7/21/2008
I just found your story and look forward to reading more. can't wait to hear Edward's explanantion about leaving and about Rosalie.
| Sweet Little Bullet chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
I found this and read it extremely fast.
I hope you intend to update fast before I implode.
| juliet233 chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
I love Alice! :) Really great chapter - I can't wait to see what happens when Bella stays over with them.
| Somah chapter 3 . 7/20/2008
O! I'm really enjoying your story.
And, I must confess, this is the first story I have ever read that has our Cullens as humans. Didn't think I'd be a fan, but I'm intrigued :)
Hope to read more soon!
| mrs. huntzberger chapter 3 . 7/19/2008
Oh, the plot thickens! I really liked this chapter. Poor Bella. Edward's got some serious 'splaining to do.
I also love how Jasper and Alice still seem to have their 'powers.' I adore them. :D