Reviews for My Brother's Best Friend
screamingSOUL chapter 4 . 7/25/2008
I have to know what happened in that room with a drunk Bella and Edward! Loved that the girls went to a gay club, I do that too with my friends at times :D
kdashlanie chapter 4 . 7/25/2008
ambiboo424 chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
haha must have been pretty hard for edward to walk out of that room...i wonder what she did to him?
Michelle62092 chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
wow, exciting chapter! :P

and what happened between Edward and Bella when he tucked her in? :P

please update soon!:D
blindbookworm chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
papierblumen chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
OMG! That was so mean what they did to Bella! I feel so bad for her now but Edward was a true gent! Keep writing because I love this story now!
ready-able chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
omg...what happened in bella's room?
Muff'Nbutter chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
Favorite quotes:

"Edward forgot that the Swans used food for superlative descriptions"

"'I didn’t know you had a problem keeping your clothes on,' he said.

Bella licked her lips before she said, 'And you seem intent on keeping my clothes off.'"

"She gets a little. . . aggressive when she's had too much to drink."

"'What did you say to her?'

'I told her I'd tuck her in'"

"'And then I hosed down the patio furniture.'

Rosalie giggled. 'That sounds exciting.'"

"Edward entered the kitchen. His hair was tousled and his t-shirt was wrinkled. He had an expression of a man who had just been tested to his limits."


nice chapter, dearie... please update soon!
loveisms chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
Wow this was such a great chapter, thank you for posting such a long one! I love this story so much. I was so embarrassed for Bella when Edward saw her, eek! I also feel really bad for poor Jacob. I hope things between Bella and Edward pick up soon. Keep up the great work!
claddaugh128 chapter 4 . 7/24/2008
aww! emmett and rosalie! they were so cute.

and edward is, of course, hot as always. can't wait for the next update!
book-aholic17 chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
i just started reading this story a couple of days ago, and loved it.

im really curious about why edward left like that.

and this last chapter isn't one of the better ones.

but probably only because jacob was in it.

if you didn't know already, im a jacobhater!


ew, she smooched jacob.


i say that whenever she kisses jacob in any story i read.

and drunk bella is always funny.

ooh. and i liked rosalie in this.

i thought she was going to be a bitch, since the conffession bella made to edward about rosalie being superficioul.. sorry i do not know how to spell.


i LOVE that your updates are like a million pages long.

makes the story all the better.
KanbiAme chapter 3 . 7/24/2008
Your writing style is beautiful! Everything seems to flow together and I can't stop reading.

I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm so excited to see how this plays out!

Good luck.

EbonyHearts chapter 3 . 7/24/2008
teeheehee! i love this story! is fantastic...

dang... i really wanted to put an evil laugh in this...

update and... uh, soon..please!

rat-de-bibliotheque chapter 3 . 7/23/2008
Ooh, my heart was fluttering. I like the way this everything seems to be falling into place. I'm wondering though, Rosalie seems pretty cool in this chapter. Why does Bella have such a bad opinion of her?
Skiiller chapter 3 . 7/22/2008
Very good, update soon, can't wait!
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