Reviews for My Brother's Best Friend
Guest chapter 5 . 5/5/2020
I like the story overall so far, but I hate the cliche Alice with the shopping addiction and playing Barbie Bella.

And I really wish Bella would stand up for herself as a grown-ass woman.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2020
I'm enjoying this story so far, but it seems like a bunch of contrived events had to be dreamed up to get Bella and Edward in the same place.

Does a bride REALLY want/need her brother there to help with wedding plans? Bella's family is SO overprotective of her, that they would make her leave town, abandoning her work and education, because they think she's "just a girl" and not a grown-ass woman? Misogynistic bastards!

Also, don't agree with the groom's sister being an automatic pick for maid of honor. No one thinks that. Rosalie would be a regular bridesmaid or be part of the wedding somehow. A lifelong best friend would trump that every day.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/30/2020
"Jasper and Emmett met at Berkeley..."

Shouldn't that be Jasper and Edward?
nhperryman chapter 9 . 2/2/2020
I am so ready for them to get a clue. Definitely a slow burn, but I am hooked!
Atwiggs chapter 10 . 12/24/2019
I truly love this story and I’m happy how it is moving along...
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 22 . 12/18/2019
Great story! I think I've read it before but I enjoyed it this time as well
Atwiggs chapter 6 . 12/16/2019
I really love this fic, it’s the best but I think Edward’s going to blow up Lol!
Atwiggs chapter 3 . 12/8/2019
Aww, Edward loves Bella!
Atwiggs chapter 1 . 12/8/2019
Omg this is killing Bella. I pray that idiot Edward will finally see the wonderful girl-Bella in front of his eyes! Yes, she is younger but they belong together! Wake up Edward!
Guest chapter 13 . 9/15/2019
This cahoter isn't fair to Edward AT ALL. Bella can't get mad at him bc he left and didn't say how he felt. She watched him leave and never said anything either. They were both wrong, Bella is awful for holding that against him when he forgave her.
Guest chapter 25 . 8/10/2019
It was a sweet story.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
Obsessedreader83 chapter 23 . 5/5/2019
I love this story so much! Can’t believe I haven’t read it before now?! The writing is awesome and the storyline even better. Lots of angst in the beginning (which I actually like) and a decent build up to the ending. Love the inclusion of other main characters as well
Guest chapter 5 . 2/23/2019
I just cant read this anymore...bella makes me feel ashamed to be a woman...and little miss priss was leading Jacob on and she says something to rose?
Guest chapter 3 . 2/23/2019
Bella needs to grow some balls. What 23 year old woman lets people boss her around like that?
Guest chapter 2 . 2/23/2019
Isnt the way edward is acting toward bella inappropriate?
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