Reviews for The Terrible Tea of D
oo Countess D oo chapter 12 . 5/13/2013
Great story - love the end (-:
BlackCatAnimeGirl chapter 3 . 3/21/2013
:)
Ka chapter 10 . 11/30/2012
... Ah, mystical manifestations of fanfic authors.
One of the Colorless chapter 9 . 6/6/2010
I have a question. How did Leon hear a silent sob? o_O
One of the Colorless chapter 8 . 6/6/2010
Typo Alert: You wrote "chief" instead of "chef."
A Bonny Mouse chapter 9 . 4/10/2010
To begin , I want to praise you on your story! It's very well written, but I have a few suggestions.

First things first, please be careful of how you use the word "silently." Silently means "without sound". When you write that someone in your story "spoke silently" it presents a clear contradiction. One cannot speak if they do not produce any sound.

And secondly the word "one". I'm not writing to tell you that you use it incorrectly-you do. But when you use it as I did in my last paragraph, it gives off a formal air and contrasts oddly with the rest of your writing which is well-written, but definitely not formal.

Please take my comments in good stride. I assure you I only mean to help you. This nest phrase a write in fear of being too cheesy...keep up the good work!
accallia chapter 12 . 9/7/2009
He this is pretty great. Love the concept, and you're writing.
Rissika chapter 8 . 4/21/2009
oh, Leon is sweet:D Love it!
Rissika chapter 7 . 4/21/2009
I truly love this story;D

Scene in water is really hot! I hope next time you would write M story:D
Rissika chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
ooch! Part in dress shop is wonderful! And that Leon's comment! Great job!:D
Rissika chapter 4 . 4/21/2009
Omg. Animals are very cruel;P
Rissika chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
Again, great chapter. I love T-chan monologue.
Rissika chapter 2 . 4/21/2009
That's a really good story!

I'm quite curious what's wrong with D. Well, and what he drank.
Rissika chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
Great start!

And I like your style.
Kai'uri Otiyashi chapter 12 . 3/15/2009
This was truly cute 'n fluffy! I loved it, so adorable! Wonderful job.
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