|Reviews for The Move|
| dusty999 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
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| Na-cat chapter 1 . 8/14/2008
This was great to read! Clear without being simple, and the story flows well :)
| Crazy PurpleSage chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
Oh, that was really good. Your writing was very intense, in a calm fashion. I don't know, does that make sense? In any event, it was really good.
You said that this will be part of a Taito series? I would definitely love that. Continue it please. I look forward to reading more from you!
| Shirakawa Myself chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Wow, there goes Tai's life ... :P
I would definitely like to see how this turns out, cause it's very interesting ]
| SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
I liked this :)
Your writing style is good, nice and clear but not simple.
Only error I could find is that you spelt the last word wrong :p