|Reviews for A Different Beginning|
| Son of Zeus0001 chapter 1 . 3/1
The concept is good, and I will continue to read. However, you do a lot of telling and not a lot of showing.
| Kaldi97 chapter 9 . 1/12/2014
| kelwin chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
| imnotraven16 chapter 9 . 6/12/2013
| r1ncewind1 chapter 9 . 4/13/2013
too bad you stopped writing this :(
| r1ncewind1 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
nice story.. too bad you never continued it.
| Kythorian chapter 9 . 2/4/2012
too bad this was abandoned. I enjoyed what was written so far. There isn't nearly enough good WoT fanfiction out there. Oh well. Hope you get back to it someday.
| Akane Mosoa chapter 9 . 12/26/2011
it appears that it been more than two years since the last update. Please get back to writing this story soon. If you are no longer writing please put it up for adoption so someone else can continue.
| Akane Mosoa chapter 5 . 12/26/2011
I'm sorry but more than half the chapter is repeating what was already written and there for is mostly useless. you should rewrite it to make it more interesting. To repeat certain areas of a chapter it should be no less than 5 or 6 chapters hence, and even then not with so much detail.
| jackson44 chapter 9 . 9/29/2011
| Vallavarayan chapter 9 . 6/27/2011
| Garyu chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
Good stuff, can't wait for the next chapter :D
| smexyforever chapter 9 . 2/28/2011
This is a really promising story!
i really like wheel of time, and this is oh so good version...
please write more.
| Arekanderu chapter 9 . 12/21/2010
The story seems to be flirting with mary suish elements and could use a lot of work on the characters and action but still it's quite entertaining
| Gladonost chapter 8 . 7/6/2010
This chapter is not writing so much as it is art this is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read