Reviews for Payment
aaml007 chapter 1 . 9/2
HOW DARE U PUT ADVANCESHIPPING IN THERE?! I FUCKING HATE IT! POKESHIPPING ALL THE WAY! THIS IS THE WORST STORY I'VE EVER READ!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2015
i like your other stories,but this one,was just !
Lover of Pokemon chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
Um...I think I'll stick with the part up to where he blacks out.
Kimori Takahashi chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Hm...is it illegal to seek someone's pokemon without their permission?
If it is then I sorta see the three of them going to jail...even if ash isn't that kind of guy...but still...

Its a bit of a sad ending but...it was a good story for the ending
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
I agree with ny514
saltyarmhair346 chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
That was absolutly awful, awful, awful, awful, awful, I can't say it enough, but I will say it again, awful. Awful. Fuck you.
DewElr chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
Hate it i bet its illegal to gamble pokemon
Bro chapter 1 . 2/7/2014
DDDDDDDDDUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDdddEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE Awesome there should be a sequel
Not a hater chapter 1 . 2/2/2014
I hate it it's so mean and sad u are stupid :(

Srry but it's true
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Dickheads
All of them
annonymous chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
This is honestly kind of sickening.
Zeofox chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
While the ending was cruel and usual punishment, it still wasn't necessary. Wait till those three land in debtors prison and when everyone else turns their back on them leaving ash the only to get them out, well...let's say that an apology won't cut it.
NY514 chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
That was motherfucking bullshit I mean come on you accidentally destroy some damn bikes big whop this is a piece of shit
Slapwave chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
I meant u have a fucking horrible mind what's ur problem?
Slapwave chapter 1 . 2/9/2012
I've got a fucking horrible mind what's ur problem?
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