Reviews for Slave
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
I just read this and really enjoyes it. The 'smut' was well written and detailed but my favourite part is the ending when you find out its all an act. Well done!
Artemis2070 chapter 1 . 8/13
What the fuck
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5
This was the most hottest erotic thing ive ever read
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30
Omg I was mot expecting that...
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17
Absolutely amazing
ElianaValdez-DaughterofHermes chapter 1 . 10/16/2016
Love the twist!
kitten137 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
that twist tho!
Ravenlight Dragon chapter 1 . 5/15/2016
Well that was a delightful twist! And a lovely bit of smut!
Harmony Rose Zabini - Malfoy chapter 1 . 4/27/2016
Oh My God that was amazing I should have realized it when you said there was a twist but I had no clue I loved it.
Mistress-Cinder chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Fun twist! Role playing is fun!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
Cute at the end! XD do a chapter with Draco as the slave
characetsworld6891 chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
the ending was fantastic!
anonymous chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
Omg that was great but the ending was the absolute BEST.
hpfan addict chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Okay?!- that was hot as heck! Whoo! I mean it! WAY TO TO YOUR SMUT!-WOW! Now that's a talent! I don't know if you're familiar with Christine Feehan, the author, of "the dark Carpathian series" of books? But dang! You inadvertantly, captured her erotically charged, possessive sense of ferocious love-making, scenes; with such ease and fluidity, it's uncanny! You brilliantly portrayed the romance, and love — not merely lust, or abrasive dominance; that can accompany a willing couple, in safely-practiced, bondage role-play!(which unsurprisingly, is not easy to do!) As an occasional reader of mild-bdsm-fiction, I applaud your skill! I'm sincerely impressed! It takes more than an imagination's creativity; far more than basic writing skills; and even slightly more than a detailed idea, to pull off the kind of high quality -erotic fiction, that you displayed here! For that? –you require an inherent, ingrained talent! And the vivid imagination of a day-dreamer, as well as, some obvious knowledge of 'bondage,' as a sexually preferential style, of fiction,(of course!?)which whether or, not you were aware, you possessed?-I assure you, You Do! Boy do you?! Really genuinely a fantastic read! That I look hopefully forward to perusing again! Cheers!;-)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2015
That twist at the end! Ugghh, love it! 3
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