Reviews for Submission
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2014
This was totally amazing and so hot
Ebon fire Red waters chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Aww
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This is sick. I'm guessing your a fan of fifty shades of grey? Disgusting
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
When women say no, it really means NO. Shame on you for sharing that kind of stories, where women are abused. I hope that young people don't read your stories, it could lead them to misunderstanding what sex is in a relationship...
alfay93 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
LOve it!
NyaDC chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
AWESOME!
Rc chapter 1 . 8/15/2012
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. I LOVED IT. *_*
Chichi4mangaHero chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
i loved it i hope you write a sequal xD
DiaClass chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
.HOT!
RiverDarkness chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I could see neji being like this. Hes been made most of his life to be submissive to the clan so i guess its only natural he would feel the need to dominate and show his masculine side with a woman. Very well written. Loved it!
ali5ma chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
hot story i love it
fairytwin chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
i like it alot, . and not just cause the lemon . but that did help lol, could you ,make a squeal please! like neji jealous when ino is talking to an ex (shikamaru) . i would wuv you forever if you do
Turqcoyce chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Wow. This was excellent. Spectacular. Wonderful. It was different from the usual lemons. It was rough and sexy, and completely enjoyable. You are a wonderful writer. I hope to read more from you.
Name chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
Oops, when I said:

"Anyway, I love how Baer you make an aggressive and dominant guy sound, so please wrote more."

I really meant:

" Anyway, I love how hot you make an aggressive and dominant guy sound, so please wrote more."

I have no idea why I wrote "Baer" instead of hot. I don't think Baer is even a word...
Name chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
I love your stories. They have to be the hottest things I've ever read. Are you still writing? Because I would just love if you wrote more dominant-submissive stories starring Sakura! Have you thought about light bondage, like Sakura tied up or handcuffed? And also various positions like in the closet or in the shower or in the kitchen, that sort of stuff. Anyway, I love how Baer you make an aggressive and dominant guy sound, so please wrote more.
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