|Reviews for Ment To Be Were We?|
| Kasuchi Koichi chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
Not bad. The rivalry between Sonia and Luna will be funny and I can’t wait for the next chapter. Also the first person POV is not as great as it could.
| Alliedman chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Pleas continue I wanna know what happens next.
| Lost Phantasm chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Your first story, I presume? Don't worry; if you push yourself to become better, you will...
By the way, be VERY careful of how you portray the characters... If they're still 5th graders, don't have them do adult stuff, y'know? So far, it looks all right.
I'm looking forward to the next installment of your story.
A writer needing inspiration,
| sonialvr12 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
hey its me the author. i am really sorry for spelling or length. as i said it my if any one has ideas for the next chapters to come the would be highly appreciated. ;-) Tks.