|Reviews for Kurotsuki|
| ShionStar chapter 27 . 1/4
I love your story. Hoping for more updates soon.
| Immortal Savior chapter 12 . 11/30/2013
... my love...
| Dark-Angel-Princess 01 chapter 27 . 10/14/2013
please update soon!
| Kyrinne chapter 18 . 4/28/2013
I can remember trying to read this before, and I'm having the same result as before. This has no connectivity, your constant character shifting leaves no sense of authenticity, and either be in first or third person. Don't mix it up. I never read your bio, so I don't know if english is your mother tongue, but I would highly doubt it. Just from this, I would never read another one of your stories. Take it as a flame if yoy want, all critiques can lead to inprovement if you take the initiative.
If your writing keeps like this, I won't be back. Painfully honest.
| Samuel Wheeler chapter 6 . 5/13/2012
Please update more
| g chapter 27 . 4/30/2012
like it hi there is this amazing bl game/drama cd/manga(the game and cd are in japanes but you can get the translaton on google) called Lucky Dog 1 Blast or just Lucky Dog 1 but the manga is not bl it just implys it and it NEEDS MORE LOVE please cheack it out and tell others about it its about Gian Carlo Bourbon Del Monte, a young member of the mafia, is better known by his nickname "Lucky Dog" due to his incredible good luck. Despite knowing that he can escape with just a little effort, Gian decides to take a break from the fast-and-furious lifestyle while being imprisoned in a maximum-security jail. But when four young mafia captains are captured and brought to the same prison, the Boss of their syndicate makes a certain request of Gian... please help this amazing game/manga get more attention it needs alot more love it is too good tell me what you think about it please I AM BEGGING YOU . for game and cd translations and 2010/06/23/bl-game-review-%E2%80%93%C2%A0lucky%C2%A0dog1/ and read the manga too manga/lucky_dog_1_blast/ it gets more exciteing the more you read IT NEEDS MORE LOVE TELL OTHERS PLEZ
| Noren Rose chapter 27 . 4/26/2012
I have read all 27 chapter of your story in the last four nights and I'm truly addicted. I hope you update soon for I cannot stand the suspense! :) great job.
| uwohali chapter 27 . 4/24/2012
Great story, lots of drama, fun to read. But going on the 4th year, when I received the update I forgot what the story was about. It was good enough for a second read, but you say not sure when it will finish. I think I'll wait till it's finally done so I can enjoy the whole thing. Glad you got rid of kahomay, her bitchiness is annoying, she never matured in the show. That was so great to write her quietly out, she was not needed or necessary, just garbage. The dragon triplets are very amusing. Trust worthy snakes, wow I do like how you play with them. I know life interfers with writing but please try to update or finish story. On a side note I think you have good potiental as a writer.
| Seylin chapter 27 . 4/20/2012
I never get bored of the wonderful characterization in this story. I will keep reading as long as you keep updating!
| gypsydancer529 chapter 27 . 4/19/2012
*cries in relief* Your back, you bitch! How dare you leave us for so long! *sheepishly* I had honestly forgotten about this story! BUT...it is still awesome, I just had to re-read it again and now I am caught up. Sesshomaru is so going to kick his ass when he finds out what the problem was and I can't believe Inu-chan went full demon on his ass, although it was kinda funny! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
| HeidiFox chapter 27 . 4/18/2012
IT LIVES! Congrats! I have to reread cuz I forget...
| Esha Napoleon chapter 27 . 4/18/2012
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 26 . 4/12/2012
This is really good! Do you plan on continuing it? (Please say yes! XD)
| Eru no Tsubasa chapter 2 . 3/12/2012
Really good so far! XD
| Sonnenfrost chapter 26 . 11/23/2011
a great story and i really adore the dragon triplets
i am looking forward to your next chapters