Reviews for Desperate Obsessions, Dangerous Consequences
Whirlwind421 chapter 8 . 5/4/2016
Good story.
Hopeless chapter 7 . 2/13/2016
Loved it until this chapter. I like what you had going, but killing the baby just threw me off. I came from unwanted circumstances, so yeah…and I hoped for a happier ending, or at least Legolas to have some remorse. I could see myself in the child almost, and wanted to see how Legolas and Aragorn could raise him/her together. But I suppose that’s not happening. It’s not a bad story, but not my kind of story anymore. Thank you for writing it though.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/9/2016
When my family comes in my room i'm like, Fuck dis shit i'm out!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/9/2016
Legolas Left his hair down
Me: Fuckin' Rebel Mate! so Rebellious!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/9/2016
NOOOO why cant it be aragorns child!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
Ooo We got a jelly Aragorn on floor one!
EnvyTheSnake chapter 2 . 9/13/2015
Guest chapter 8 . 3/29/2015
That was so good! Thankyou!
KILILOVER chapter 5 . 3/29/2015
I swear to Mahal if you kill Legolas I will find and murder you. And I know that Mahal is the dwarves god but I don't care.
Guest chapter 8 . 10/23/2014
nicely written!
SairaRose chapter 8 . 6/22/2014
I've honestly never been an Aragorn/Legolas fan, but this story captivated me right from the very start. I love how you set up their friendship, set up how Legolas met Tylin (forgive the misspelling-I can't remember if it was Y or I) and the aftermath of the rape.

You filled this story with such real emotions, and the baby's death struck me as very real. It didn't just morph into a happily ever after lies-abound fic where Aragorn's love miraculously heals Legolas and makes him feel unconditional love for his rapist's child.

This was real, raw, and true. Wonderful job. And see? They can still have their happy ending without it being unrealistic. The emotion was so heart-wrenching and pure. Keep writing, because you're incredible at it.
Hoa chapter 8 . 8/20/2013
It was a good story, well written. You managed to keep modesty and reserve about rape and miscarriage scenes, that increased the quality of your plot, because I often read some rape/Mpreg fics where ALL is described and it gave the sensation of bad weird porn fictions most of the time, with a total out of character Legolas. You managed to make a good and realistic Legolas by the way, and that's is so good to read... Perhaps you could have work a little more with your original characters (Legolas' siblings, whom I find intersting), and have a longer epilogue about Aragorn and Legolas' relationship ending. But it's really cool in any case, I really enjoyed reading your story !
AkiraNatsume chapter 8 . 7/14/2013
More chapters please. Lots more.
alexiana75 chapter 5 . 12/10/2012
Oh,poor guy. Maybe, they still fall in love one for another?
alexiana75 chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
It is not ATAR, is ADAR. But, a good chapter.
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