Reviews for It would be simple
BarbKayW chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
Excellent!
EmmaDel chapter 1 . 2/13/2013
This is really good. Love it.
russetwolfgirl chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Any chance that you will continue the story or have someone else continue it for you? I really liked it!
apolasik chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Love that last line... My sun, my Jacob. She should be with him :)
Mrs.Dimitri Belikov chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
awwww!sooo cute. you're plot was simple but fit the charectors beutifuly!

great job.
Okee's Mom chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Very nice alternate version of events. Concise oneshot that is convincing and has a nice arc.
In Love Wit Da Supernatural chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
awsome storey toatally going on my favs
VanessaLoveJoy chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I LOVED it! Amazing! Great Job! Perfect! I don't know - just can't say enough ;) I look forward to reading other stories of yours in the future!
female-otaku chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I really like your writing style on this piece...it made me really think that this is was Bella actually thought & said...also I always all the interruptions that ppl put into these kind of scenes...anyway...keep writing, your good at it!
HopeAlways chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
I approve!
AManDuhh chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Loved it. Wouldn't mind if you made more ;-)
tipica adolescente chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
oh that was so sweet D
1world-traveler chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
aw so sweet
XohopelessromanticXo3 chapter 1 . 10/29/2009
aw cute and sexy at the same time!
Twilight-Jacob-Lover chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
aw... you should make this into a two shot! this was really good!
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