Reviews for Realize
x3Kiome chapter 1 . 7/14/2008

OH MY GOD ! I love your story SO much ! I just read chapter three on twilighted and I was SO depressed when there wasn't more! When I was browsing around and found this.. I LITERALLY JUMPED UP IN HAPPINESS.

I love your story. :D I couldn't favorite your story on twilighted and i can and i'm SO happy. Okay. ON TO READING !
ObsessingOverEdward chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
OMG! I have never been thrilled with the idea of Jake and Bella together until this story! He's so sweet and attentive.

On the flip side, I've never been more irritated with Edward as I am right now! Sheesh! I can see the drama coming with Tanya. Will she get Edward to get rid of Bella, will Bella finally get fed up and leave, will Edward ask her to leave or will he finally get his head out of his pants? I can't wait to find out!

I love stories that illicit emotion and I have to say that on several occasions reading this story today I found myself tearing up for poor Bella, screaming at the screen at Edward and feeling the pain and depth of Bella's love that is not returned. Excellent! If your making your readers feel all of that emotion you are writing brilliantly!

Can't wait for the next update. Thanks for sharing!
meeshwuu chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
awsome. I really am liking this story. Please update soon, because I can't wait for more!
frequentlydazzeledbylit chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
loved it! update son!

-A :)
Eddiefan chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
So good! I'm loving the way that you write Jake. He is just too sexy and charming for his own good. How do you picture him? Are you imagining Steven Strait at all here? He is so darn hot. I also loved seeing Edward squirm a little bit. It's super good that Bella has been up front and honest with Jake and that he knows what he is getting himself into. And NO! This story does NOT make me want to sleep! You rock!
arielCullen416 chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
aww its so good! but your story is so sad, it makes me want to cry. i know exactly what she is feeling, always the friend never the girlfriend.

it would be great if she came out in the end with edward! jake is good for now but edward jealous is very entertaining!

please update soon!

i absolutely love this story!

GunzGoBangg chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Once again amazing.

And I love the way that Jake is there to play Bella up.

He's so sweet though.


Great chapter!

Update soon!
glass box of emotion chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Aahh! I'm so happy that Jake is a decent guy since Edward is clearly acting like a douche bag. Loving the story... can't wait for the next chapter.
Amanda.In.Tx chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Soo loved it! )
sles chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
So good! I'm so happy that you brought in Jake the way you did, Bella really does deserve to be happy! And I'm very excited to see what happens on their get away!
literatefanatic27 chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Aww! I love it, keep going!
sayok79 chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
okay, i cried a little but it was a good cry, cause that means this story is awesome. hurry and update.
CondorSlappy chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Definetly a good chapter, probably my favorite one yet! Its good that bellas focused on something else and I think edward can see that, mabye he'll finally com to his senses, lol.

Update Soon.
Bronzehairedgirl620 deleted chapter 5 . 7/14/2008
Once again, I really liked it. Am still totally pissed at Edward and want to murder Tanya, but not as much as the last chapter.

On the plus side, you've made me actually like Jake. And trust me, that is the HARDEST task anyone could ever try and accomplish - I can't stand him in the books. So nice job on that; I like how you had him try and show how amazing Bella is and how he knows that she's in love with Edward, instead of him being clueless. It's completely cliche, and this is more true to the original plot of Eclipse.

But looking forward to another chapter!
Stormy Bella chapter 5 . 7/14/2008

I must say this, I rather liked the Jake in this story. Don't get me wrong, I want Edward and BElla together, but at the same time, Jake is too good of a man to pass up.

You have really changed my view on Jake.


Stormy Bella.
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