Reviews for Losing Love
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 3 . 2/18
I like this chapter. Thank you for updating.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 2 . 2/17
Nice chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 2/17
Interesting start to the story. I look forward to reading more soon.
Guest chapter 9 . 10/30/2014
This is a really good fanfic i like it
emojilover chapter 7 . 7/25/2014
Good chapter i love it.
emojilover chapter 5 . 7/25/2014
Oh yeah bella finally moved and she and jasper dating and she moved on from that lanky long son of a bitch and moved to a nice hot boy with dimples and sexy hair named Jasper Whitlock Hale. Jasper moved on from that psychotic fuckin pixie named Alice Cullen and movd on to bella
emojilover chapter 3 . 7/25/2014
Its okay i kinda like cliffies
Jasper iz da bez chapter 10 . 6/25/2014
In the actual book of twilight they have beds. Either for THAT( making out.(I don't wanna say it!)) or so if they have visitors that don't know they seem normal.
Guest chapter 12 . 12/2/2013
MinnieMatthews chapter 12 . 6/10/2013
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Omg. Omg.
GeezerWench chapter 12 . 8/22/2012
WTF is Edward doing back there?

GeezerWench chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
Well, of course they don't need beds for sleep, but if you'll recall all of them but Edward had beds. The mated pairs.

GeezerWench chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
Writing Jake as kind of a jerk is good though. It was one of the appealing things about him. he spoke truth to Bella.

Best part (in the books) was when he would say, "Don't be stupid, Bella."

Abrupt, but true. Edward continuously kept things from her. Jake was honest damn near to a fault. Their fighting and fussing back and forth was another appealing thing about the two of them.
GeezerWench chapter 2 . 8/22/2012
Puzzling. Does the story ever get around to saying how Edward, Alice and Jasper have all lived together (with everyone else) for 50 years and they just NOW figure out they love each other?
RandomGerman chapter 5 . 4/20/2012
I like your style of writing, but this relationship comes on out of the blue and makes both Jasper and Bella seem no better than their exes. Maybe you should build up to it more so they aren't kissing the moment the love of their life/wife leave the driveway?
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