|Reviews for Losing Love|
| Guest chapter 12 . 12/2/2013
STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK STICK :( J good cliffhanger
| MinnieMatthews chapter 12 . 6/10/2013
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. Omg. Omg.
| GeezerWench chapter 12 . 8/22/2012
WTF is Edward doing back there?
| GeezerWench chapter 10 . 8/22/2012
Well, of course they don't need beds for sleep, but if you'll recall all of them but Edward had beds. The mated pairs.
| GeezerWench chapter 7 . 8/22/2012
Writing Jake as kind of a jerk is good though. It was one of the appealing things about him. he spoke truth to Bella.
Best part (in the books) was when he would say, "Don't be stupid, Bella."
Abrupt, but true. Edward continuously kept things from her. Jake was honest damn near to a fault. Their fighting and fussing back and forth was another appealing thing about the two of them.
| GeezerWench chapter 2 . 8/22/2012
Puzzling. Does the story ever get around to saying how Edward, Alice and Jasper have all lived together (with everyone else) for 50 years and they just NOW figure out they love each other?
| RandomGerman chapter 5 . 4/20/2012
I like your style of writing, but this relationship comes on out of the blue and makes both Jasper and Bella seem no better than their exes. Maybe you should build up to it more so they aren't kissing the moment the love of their life/wife leave the driveway?
| Monica chapter 12 . 3/14/2012
It's really good! Can't wait to read the sequel
| Mylissa chapter 11 . 2/18/2012
one question how do you dress your teeth lol here is the quote from the story so you know what im about I quickly got dressed and rushed up into the bathroom. I dressed my teeth and pulled my hair into a ponytail.
| Mylissa chapter 10 . 2/18/2012
i love your story. the person that said it was garbage needs to just shut there mouth. thanks for continuing the story
| AnnaKathlyn15 chapter 7 . 2/11/2012
aww. this chapter was soooo cute!
| Sparven chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
Like 70% of the english-speaking authors on this site you cant tell the difference of 'definitely' and 'defiantly'. And you claim straight A:s...
I hope its the first you mean when you write the second.
Look up the difference!
| Her chapter 11 . 11/24/2011
"I quickly got dressed and rushed up into the bathroom. I dressed my teeth and pulled my hair into a ponytail."
How do you dress your teeth?
| TheYumeTsumetai chapter 12 . 10/25/2011
Yea. This is the part where I throw sticks at you...BURNING STICK BULLETS FROM A GUN! *Pew,Pew,Pew,PEW,PEW,PEW, P-FREAKING-EW*
| DarknekoKurai chapter 14 . 10/8/2011
i like this! i cant wait to find out what going on in the squeal