Reviews for Syzygy
ratgirl chapter 13 . 7/31/2008
beautiful
buggage chapter 13 . 7/31/2008
aw that was so sweet. and not at all smutty like a lot of them get. just the right amount of steam. lovin it. patiently waiting for more.
Im Bettin On Alice chapter 13 . 7/31/2008
Umm...wow! That was good! But kinda disturbing...But hey, you warned us. Please update soon, that is if the story isnt done, and it doesnt say completed so I would assume it isnt! Lol!
Maye Faire chapter 13 . 7/31/2008
Thanks for a great story!

~Sarah
Maye Faire chapter 11 . 7/31/2008
Ah, too short! Good, though.
Maye Faire chapter 10 . 7/31/2008
Great wedding scene! Loved it! Keep on writing,

~Sarah
Maye Faire chapter 9 . 7/31/2008
Great chapter! I'm so glad E and B worked through their problems! 'And we can have sex.' I LOVE that line! Only Bella, haha. Good job; keep on writing!

~Sarah
piccolabimba chapter 13 . 7/30/2008
Very nice;y written. Thanks for putting that bit about Renee in.
piccolabimba chapter 10 . 7/30/2008
*sniff* so sweet! I like how you incorporated the quotes from breaking dawn into this chapter
wallywest chapter 2 . 7/30/2008
Aww w

UPDATE SOON!
piccolabimba chapter 9 . 7/30/2008
You do a wonderful job of humanizing (you know what I mean) the characters. It's real that there would be misunderstandings and hurt feelings. Good job!
ratgirl chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
I am really enjoying this, good plot and good writing! looking forward to seeing more
buggage chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
hm the tension builds. Edward needs to be open with her, or her mistrust will grow
Im Bettin On Alice chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
This is really good! Please update soon!
piccolabimba chapter 8 . 7/30/2008
What is going on? :) the mystery is building and the plot is getting twisted!
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