|Reviews for The Place That August Brings|
| pseudonym blue chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
wow, i liked this. . . and i was surprised by how poetic it was. really good job, great writing :)
| writingblondie chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
This was beautifully written. Great job!
| kci47 chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
| Ski000Girl chapter 1 . 12/7/2008
the first part was very poetic and captivating. it drew you in and made you want more and i liked how you ended with the same directional quotes.
| Birdgirl204 chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
Wow. That's pretty amazing.
| toffeepop chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
This is unbelievable good; I especially loved the lyrical style you used. It actually reminds me of works by a (very talented) New Zealand author we all study at school: ever heard of Witi Ihimaera? No? Never mind. Fantastic, anyway.
| youkai chick supreme chapter 1 . 7/11/2008
interesting. a bit oddly worded, but not in a negative way. i do so love this pairing when they're young! it's so sweet on sev's part... loved the last part right before the little "epilogue" at the end. that was especially cute.
| awhiffofamortentia chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
aww what a sweet story!
i really like your writing style-its very unique!
| bugaboo107 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
What a sweet, innocent little piece. It was very well-written. I loved that sense you give the reader, of being a onlooker peeking into a little snowglobe with these two lost souls. Aww. I have never read anything so... timeless.
"Just slip out the window, sneak through the back door, and run away to it; but remember to send a note ahead, held in a beak or clutched in able talons, for solitude is not always the best asylum."
Off to find this sanctuary 'halfway to Spinner's End and halfway from Buckthorn Hollow.'
| duj chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
If only they could have stayed there.
| Rachel Indeed chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
This was lyrical and gorgeous, evoking an almost magical sense of innocence and possibility. I loved it! The second-person passages work very well to create a near-fairy-tale voice of narration. It feels like the last children's story Severus and Lily ever got to share, and I am glad that it went beautifully, unpredictably well for them. Thanks so much for sharing this!