|Reviews for Memory World|
| The Harmonious Rain chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
Nice begining loved neclece of time
| HollyKalina23 chapter 3 . 4/21/2009
I saw a few references to other shows in here. Although I'm not sure if they were intentional it fitted perfectly!
| Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 14 . 4/1/2009
Aki: ... Well? Aren't you gonna say something?
Gash: . (Shakes head)
Aki: O.o Are you SERIOUS?...
Gash: - (Nods)
Aki: ... Okay, Zeon, she is obviously not our Gash!
Zeon: (Flipping through a magazine) And you're saying that?
Gash: (All of a sudden glomps Aki, huggling her tightly) APRIL FOOL'S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !" **-**
Gash: Dun you rem'mber what April Fool's Day is?
Zeon: (Begins to fan Aki with a paper fan)
Gash: Well, anywho... ME'SA LIKED IT A LOT, SISSY-CHAN! TWAS CUTESIES! UPDATE SOONSIES!
| MzNightmare13 chapter 14 . 4/1/2009
It's nice to see they are happy. Please more Atemu and Zahur or Yugi and Yami.
| Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 13 . 3/17/2009
... My guess is that Nebit is Missy's past life, judging from her story?
~_~ Me'sa really liked the chapter, honest I dids, Nee-Nee-chan!... But, me'sa just kinda blah right now, no feel hyper as usual...
I can't wait to see the next chapter, though.
| MzNightmare13 chapter 13 . 3/16/2009
I loved it. I can't believe they got posioned.
One little favor... could you add a little atemu and zahur fluff, I feel like they are getting pushed away along with Yugi and Yami. I mean where did all the present day people go?
| Yaoi King 1000 chapter 13 . 3/16/2009
| Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 12 . 3/15/2009
Gash: Me'sa so sorries for not reviewing earlier! My dummy-wummy immune system's weak, and me'sa's been sickies a lotsu... but... (Giggles) That WAS cutesies!
Aki: -.-' Here we go again...
Zeon: Just smile and nod.
Gash: Sissy-chan, me'sa really liked it! - AND YAY FOR UPCOMING SEQUEL! Me'sa gots somethin' to look forward to after this story's doney-woney! -
Aki: (Sneaking up behind her with a baseball bat)
Gash: Aki! (Turns around, accidentally knocking her down with Rufus) Can I shoutsies somet'ing, pwease?
Aki: _ Do you know the muffin man?...
Gash: - Yes!
Aki: ... _~ Yeah...
Gash: (Takes in a DEEP breath) ME WUVED IT! UPDATE SOONSIES, NEE-NEE-CHAN! **-**
| MzNightmare13 chapter 12 . 3/12/2009
I saw the kiss as a brotherly thing. I mean they are like brothers so that wasn't so bad. Lots of different pairings in here. I still wonder if Zahur will get pregnant to give Atemu an heir or will Mert-Re still have to have the baby.
At least Bakura isn't just using Nefertari.
| Yaoi King 1000 chapter 12 . 3/12/2009
Wow, that was cool!
| MzNightmare13 chapter 11 . 2/11/2009
Ew really not a fan of Mahado and Atemu, but I know they don't really like each other that way. Sweet Atemu was able to save his lover.
| Yaoi King 1000 chapter 11 . 2/11/2009
And a cool rescue aswell.
| Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 11 . 2/10/2009
... Review button didn't trick me this time!... . And there's a cold going around Nee-Nee-chan's house, too? I'm starting to get sick myself... just glad I haven't caught the flu going around my school-all I have to say, is thank God for vaccinations.
Anywho... I'm so tired that when I read the sentence "I was thinking about how adorably kawaii it would be if they showed just a hint of liking each other that way!", I thought that "a hint of liking each other that way" had said "a hint of killing each other that way", which make me think: O.o ... Okay, something is definitely not right there!... So I reread it...
Again, anywho... I really liked it, and I hope to see more soon. ~_~ Man, I would have much more energy to say things better if I didn't feel like crapola...
| Yaoi King 1000 chapter 10 . 2/5/2009
PLEASE MAKE THIS LAST LONGER THEN THE EVIL ZANE BIT THOUGH
| Coco Gash Jirachi chapter 10 . 2/4/2009
Gash: ... The review button is STILL tricking me! T_T
Aki: Is that REALLY the first thought on your mind?
Gash: . No, but I had to say it!
Aki: -.-' I oughta be paid to do this...
Gash: Anywhos... _' Yeah, I confused myself trying to remember how to review again... I had one of my rare dumb moments!
Gash: Anywhos for the second time, I must say, I didn't see this coming! Aster and Satori-chan's past lives... and Zahur is gone? LE GASPETH! o.o
Aki: You two are IDIOTS-
Gash: UPDATE SOON I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!