Reviews for Precious People
Vishw chapter 15 . 6/22
I don't really feel Sakura is really over Sasuke. Sure she's much better than the rude, loud, violent fangirl that she was, but I wonder if she will be able to resist if he showed even a little bit of interest in her. She still keeps calling him Sasuke-kun and after breaking his nose instead of taking advantage, she just stood there, worrying about him.

Naruto's obnoxious, loud childishness is also really grating. I'd have thought that after his fight with Sakura, he'd remain mature-ish, but he regressed to his loud, obnoxious self rather quickly.
Vishw chapter 14 . 6/22
Wonder why so many writers seem to undermining the creative potential of Kage Bunshin. It is probably one of the best scouting techniques yet many writers just ignore it.
Carla the wizard chapter 5 . 2/16
Sakura wake up hun!
Carla the wizard chapter 4 . 2/16
Omg kiba! Aaahhhh so sweet!
Carla the wizard chapter 3 . 2/14
So good! Can’t wait to see Sakura relationship develop with her team mates especially with naruto
Carla the wizard chapter 2 . 2/13
I just wanna give naruto a hug !
Carla the wizard chapter 1 . 2/13
I really like the team you picked for our team 8 and team 7 for many reason

Naruto , kiba and Sakura would actually get along since the boys don’t butt head like naruto and sasuke do . That and Sakura would improve more cause she not focusing on sasuke .

Sasuke , Hinata and Shino has potential , shino is quite same with The others only Sasuke won’t be losing his temper with naruto or Sakura ( I wonder will their be conflict between sasuke and hinata cause hinata is from a high clan but she not that good with her ability like her cousin /little sister )

If it was sasuke , Sakura and hinata it wound be a disaster for many reasons , while Naruto , kiba and Shino would be a chill team ?

Those are just my thoughts
CHRIS8477 chapter 2 . 5/14/2022
Good story, and I like that we may get a strong nonfan-girl Sakura. Maybe she can be a strong, confident, reliable, and useful kunoichi. Sakura, Tintin, and Hinata are my top three, but Sakura was made a useless trope to ful fill the manga/anime tropes.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/19/2021
You have great writing skills that's for sure but there are some things that I don't like in the story , This version of Naruto is quite weaker than canon for example Canon Naruto defeated Kiba in premilniary without a taijutsu style and here this Naruto is Losing to him also the fact that he is main character you should teach some new stuff so it's increases the interest of reading more . I liked kurenai Motherly role here . As for Sakura well she is better as canon atleast , they way she was depicted was annoying af. Also About her genjutsu skills she has good control chakra that means she can perform genjutsu easily but in Canon she lose to Kakashi's weakest genjutsu . As well as her taijutsu skill it's purely basic and she doesn't have enough power due to dieting for sasuke .In the end I would like to tell you should improve more on Naruto's character and strength , I know he is dense and not so intelligent but he learns very fast which you didn't include on story.
soodarling chapter 17 . 8/20/2021
I'm disappointed that you gave up this story. It’s so well written and it’s a pleasure to see a story or Naruto with a team that’s really close to it. I hope you will one day update this story. In fact I liked all your stories and I am disgusted that you have abandoned them all.
And narusaku love
Ashen Ogre chapter 17 . 6/9/2021
Such a well-written and engaging story. I'm sorry to see that it was never finished. You are a wonderful author
ByakugoSeal chapter 5 . 5/14/2021
I was hoping Sakura would get over Sasuke and show him her improvement but she just went back to him. I like the story though!
sunshine.katz chapter 17 . 1/2/2021
Really, really enjoyed this. I know it's unlikely to ever be completed but it's actually a fic that I will come back to re-read. Loved your writing and characterisations of them all and particularly enjoyed Kurenai as I haven't come across her much in fics previously. Thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 9 . 12/14/2020
I really like Kona’s dad’s backstory, and only Naruto could accidentally steal clan secrets
Guest chapter 8 . 12/14/2020
This is a really cool arc!
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