|Reviews for Hi There|
| LilyWafiq chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
| LttlMssTrouble chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
Too funny :D I'm still grinning, if they had smileys at FF then I would use one that's like laughing so hard it's smacking with one hand on the table :D
| VerityFrancesB chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
om...my...god...that was HILARIOUS, I nearly sprayed my coffee all over my PC at Hi there...I'm Tony DiNozzo's penis! Mwah ha ha, am still laughing!
Poor Dick *strokes Dick* (yes I meant that to be dirty!)
| Smackalicious chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Haha, nice. Only in NCIS fandom would you find someone writing a story from a penis' POV. :p I loved the part about Tony's fantasies and how he needs to buy lotion or something. LOL. Oh man. Pretty silly, but nicely done.
| Cake-Otaku chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
ok that was kinda weird and funny!
well so now we hears Tony's dick, what is next?
Ziva's Vagina ar boobs talking to her?
Well anyways keep on writing !
| xoxEllexox chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Oh my god. That was one of the funniest, most random things i have ever read. Tiva is the best. I loved it!
| rosebud26 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
*chuckles* Boy did I need a good laugh tonight! That was great.
| whoresontequila chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
| CarlieD chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Oh. My. Goodness. That was so totally random, but so amazingly funny!
| Paige M. Carter chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
*ROFLMAO* This was wonderful! Love this POV!
| LorelaiGilmore82 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
There's just one thing I can say to this:
I don't think I like you anymore. You used to watch me shave, now you do is stare at that lonesome floor. Penis I don't like you anymore.
It used to be you and me, a paper towel and a dirty magazine that's all we needed to get by .
Now it seems things have changed and you're the one to blame, Penis I don't like you anymore.
I don't think I like you anymore. Cause when you get to drinking you put me places I've never been before, Tony I don't like you anymore.
Why can't we just get a grip on our man to hand relationship. Come to terms with truely how we feel. If we put our heads together, we just stay home together.
Penis I think I like you after all.
Oh and Tony, while yer shaving, shave my balls
| PaperHat chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Now that is what I call a cry for help! I think your character should have an episode all of his own. Very, very funny!
| Belker chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I liked your unusual reader's voice... ;)
"If I start paying attention to Ziva he starts doing multiplication tables in his head." Poor little guy!
| iheartgeekz chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
I love the association to the Q continuum, the Dick Continuum LOL! I've never thought of things from a penis' perspective (seeing as I don't have one) bu this was interesting to say the least!
| aserene chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
you are so strange, but I really loved this, you wanna do one from an ovary point of view?