|Reviews for Revelations|
| JulCan1987 chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Sad and cute story, I hope you make another story like this one.
| KJMathers chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Probably should have took the hint after reading the Yu-Gi-Oh fic of yours and not read anymore, but, it being so well written I couldn't keep myself from reading. And, now, here I lay in bed, iTouch in hand, typing a review with greatly blurred vision. And even yet, I loved the fic. Perhaps it was partially due to my love of Hanatarou, but, mostly to the great writing and of the story. And, it being in character. It was nice.
-The Negotiator of Promise
| offerjupiter chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
yay Hanatarou didn't die this time :P lol I still adore your fics though; not killing Hanatarou is a plus to it XP You have me hanging onto every word just as you had me in the last two I read by you actually this fic made me cry to and I kept thinking "AW" the whole time and actually I one time I was all like "I'LL BE YOUR FRIEND HANA-CHAN!" then my mom asked me who 'Hana' was and what 'chan' meant XP lol I shouldn't shout so loud! alas I should be in bed by now but psh I will go read more fics your words really inspire me, as always, and I think I'll need 2 to some writing tonight!
| sarahlilly95 chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
Very interesting and nicely written.
| miss-abarai chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
*tear* its so heart warming! i love it so much! .
| somesortofthing chapter 1 . 9/11/2008
| persephonesfolly chapter 1 . 7/20/2008
So cute! Hanataro was as adorable in this as he was in the anime.
Nice analogy at the end with the warm/cold friendship/loneliness.
| Tony WildRiver chapter 1 . 7/16/2008
aw! that was adorable! You write Hanatarou's thought process very well. I applaud _
| Honeyfish chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Again, a very beautiful piece of writing. It's great that you've brought some touching friendship pieces to Hanatarou's section because it's severely lacking in those right now.
I've noticed a few typos peppered throughout but a quick proofread would take care of those :)
| shongnom chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
aw, this was a good one too! it's so swet