|Reviews for TwentyThree|
| Rayne The Hanyou chapter 4 . 4/29/2012
Itai! Poor Gaara-kun!
| Halan Lore chapter 4 . 1/29/2009
-tries to behead Orochimaru-
| Sandsibscrazy chapter 4 . 12/13/2008
oh god this almost brought me to tears... I loved it though, so emotional1
| black55widow chapter 4 . 10/20/2008
Next chapter - the fun. ya!
| MarshmallowTree chapter 3 . 9/18/2008
| Me chapter 3 . 8/23/2008
Update, please? I want to read more.
| Jessy-Fran chapter 2 . 7/15/2008
Interesting, I love the idea though the chapters could be a bit longer!
Oh and I liked Sasori's dirty mind! :)
I'd like to see more at some point!
| Evie-Chan589 chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
Yay an update! And yay Deidara and Gaara will meet! I am excited. _
| black55widow chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
I like it. Please post more.
| Me chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
OMG this is so good. Poor Gaa-chan though!
| Evie-Chan589 chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
This is very well written and suspenseful I'm definitely interested to see what happens next. It is pretty short but I assume that is because it's the prologue and not a real chapter. Update soon!