Reviews for New Beginnings? Or old pick ups?
Motherof8 chapter 16 . 11/26/2013
Nice story , glad she ended up with Edward and a baby. Thanks
BeckaR chapter 16 . 11/30/2011
Awesome story really loved it was so sad when eli died but the ending was great
Princess Of Souls chapter 16 . 6/2/2011
AMAZING Story!
Lee Ed chapter 3 . 12/20/2010
so bella's w/ eli or edward?
lizzyliz95 chapter 16 . 11/24/2010
OMCC that was adordibal i luvers your stories your an amaizing aurthur! i love the house of night novels lol ive only read up to untaimed though
GABY627 chapter 12 . 4/19/2010
OMG!I never ever cried over a story before..

it is so touching...I feel sorry for eli!He is my favorite in this story...this story is touching and beautiful!I love it so much!
LadyAmoreAlice chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Awesome Story ! xP I loved it very much. Your a fantastic writer !
SYWAF137 chapter 16 . 12/30/2009
this is great. i love it. at frist, i didn't think that ei should've died, but now i think it should've happened. i love everything, and i am wondering if this is the last chapter?
Ashlie Christine chapter 16 . 12/21/2009
Wonderfull! One of the best i have read!
Henny1991 chapter 13 . 7/20/2009
I love this story, but just so you know I kidnapped Eli at the last second and is now nursing him back to his full strength. kidding, but oh how much I wished that was true. real life is nothing compared to fiction.
MisaMisaLand chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
Loved your story, but I still can't beleive that Eli died!

If I had to choose I would have to say that I wanted Bella to be with Eli-as much as I love Edward, Eli was just the perfect guy for her!

Still loved it anyway!

-MisaMisaLand
XxtotallyrandomxX chapter 16 . 6/5/2009
It is a good story, I hope you continue to write stories. I was sad when Eli died though.
archieandedward chapter 7 . 6/1/2009
love it
Chloe.963 chapter 5 . 5/30/2009
ok i changed my mind. I want edward
Chloe.963 chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
wow. No! I love Eli!

OMG EDWARD IS A BASTARD!
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