|Reviews for Altered|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
2 hours? Philadelphia to Ohio?
Ya realize that from Philly to Harrisburg (mid-state, also the capital of PA) it takes 3 hours, going by the speed limit of 70 mph on the interstate.
So unless Dean completely lost it, decided to take the interstate (cameras everywhere dude), and pushed the 1967 Impala at speeds of more than 150 mph, (which you know, might be noticed), there is no way in HELL they're in Ohio.
Unless they took a faery door.
Good story except for that little fact obliterating the 4th wall.
| pipinheart chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
| slystir chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
Loved this piece. Classic ending line. Nicely tied up. Great little after case care. Love me some Mad Server. Great Daddy Winchester line btw. "Save it for peacetime, son", may use that on my own over-reactive teen boy who's always askin' questions in a crisis.
Thanks for posting!
| klaineisendgame11 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
| Neshomeleh chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
Nice short story, thanks.
| Victoriaswords chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
cant even hide a headache from you im suprised i managed this untill u ate me seriously. lol loved the story & poor dean!
| ArmedWithMyComputer chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! Sam is so awesome in this! Great job :D
~ ArmedWithMyComputer xxx
| Mzzmarie chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
So fantastic, and very creative! Loved it!
| Psycho33 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010
I really enjoyed that you wrote the boys in character. I loved the "realism" of the Winchesters in this story. Thanks yet again!
| LaedieDuske chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
::squee:: I love love love this one! There's even Dean tears! Wow, I think I need to go lie down now - I'm a little wobbly. -grin-
| sidjack chapter 1 . 6/28/2010
Wonderful hurt Dean. I like the idea of the faeries and that the boys had to hide due to killing them all. Nice Sammy taking care of Dean and fighting with him about the car as he goes into shock.
| Rosetta Brunestud chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
Great fic Sammy is always worried about his brother, sometimes he is so guilty! He couldn't have done anything, Dean is right!
I loved the fic, really
| nwspaprtaxis chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
I LOVE THIS!
And Dean so needs a cuddle... The poor guy was beaten to h*ll and back... and g*d. I love this in all it's horrible, messy, bloody glory. Loved Dean being more worried about the Impala and leather seats than the tiny fact he's... um... BLEEDING OUT. Loved Sam's assessment of his brother needing a bed and a f*ckload of Gatorade. Yeah... Gatorade would be fantastic. And love Dean refusing to go in the back seat... Just... LOVE HOW HURT DEAN IS HERE! Is this like a bad thing? I mean you had great plot, details, lines... but it comes down to Dean bleeding out that equates infinite love. And Dean being in agony as Sam unties the tourniquet...
| Foreverwolf chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Love that last line!
| Cathy1967 chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Found it. Heh! Cool story. Would have loved to have the story predating this, though. The fairy story. :D Maybe, someday? :D