Reviews for Unnatural
animefan021513 chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
I loved it! MAKE MORE! please?
MarvelouslyLost chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
This was really cute! I liked it a lot!:)
Scherherazade chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
It was well written but I can't see either of them being that dumb for so long.
Rinkame chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
O...M...G...THAT WAS AWESOME!
Sakuras Heart Healer chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
This is actually vampkin and not the person it says it is I just can't seem to log in right now and I was over at her house anyways. So, *WHACK!* You've been mauled by inspiration. You should write more now please.

-tooth grin-
iruka92 chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
LEMON IS - S E X / love love sex - - xD

this is nice. write more!
Dean Gabriel chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
Aww that was cute even though I'm more of a fan of TamaHaru... I loved that!
cratermaker chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
-sighs- Ahh... Refreshing... I do feel a bit bad for Tono, though... D: Poor Tamaki-senpai. At least he was understanding.
I am the walruss chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
Oh dear,

I remember my first lemon encounter... I was like, "lemon warning? what does that mean? oh well... (5 minutes later) HOMIGOD WHAT THE HELL!"

So yeah. Good luck
Shikon Entity Shinobu chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
i guess it is kinda soapy. oh, a lemon is a m rated thing its where they write about *blushes because she's never really talked about it* sex. It's kinda like a detailed thing about what they do
The Statue chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
*cough* Ah, "lemon" is generally considered to be the term used to denote sexual content in a story.