Reviews for Utopia
AsTheWorldFallsDown86 chapter 2 . 8/17/2012
Wow.. this is already awasome. Usually I don't say "do a update" because I see it as being rude and trying to Rush the writer, but I will be on the look out if there is any new chapters soon. I enjoyed this and love deisakusaso lol. As u can see from my user name. Anyways there not ooc and I hope you keep them a threesome with her, but if not i'll keep reading. Good job.
freeflyingwolf chapter 2 . 7/20/2009
awesome! thank you for writeing this!
Zanna-chan chapter 2 . 10/15/2008
cant wait till next chapter! keep up the great work!
Tema-Sama chapter 2 . 8/4/2008
update or die! thanks i love it soo far
defunctaccount0000000001 chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
Nice. Work on length and spelling, as well as sentence structure. Otherwise, great job, I can hardly wait to hear more.
sandshinobi4eva chapter 2 . 8/2/2008
there are some grammar mistakes but other than that i love it! but please try and make the chapters longer
Lil'LemonWolf chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
OMG! I loved it. I really want you to continue! Please keep updating!

KajiIzumi
mushi6618 chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Its good, please continue! ;P

~mushi