Reviews for The Next Step
Guest chapter 21 . 5/23
Great job!
Guest chapter 21 . 4/23/2016
Nooooooooo! Please dont abandon! This is a really good fic! And you havent updated in like 5 years!
Please try update or at least tell us if its abandoned :(
Good job tho really enjoyed reading! Hope to see continued!
Wraith's Heart chapter 21 . 3/1/2015
Okay, this is a good fic. Not outstanding, but good...*bursts into tears* why are you authors so heartless! *goes off blubbering*
Poseidon'sKid chapter 21 . 7/10/2013
Poseidon'sKid chapter 21 . 6/16/2013
chrnarnia3 chapter 21 . 3/11/2013
I was so excited to read the next chapter and then I couldn't find the NEXT button...can you PLLLEEEAAAAASSSEEEEE help me find it?
Lysander Shado chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
I don't have a ffn account so could you put it maybe in another chapter,
please? Don't do if you don't want to!
thanks and bye!
Lysander Shado chapter 21 . 3/1/2013
Let me get this straight. You haven't updated... FOR 3 FREAKIN YEARS?! But the story was just getting fun! How could you stop now?!
On a lighter note... i'm doing a little something myself. if youre not doing this story any longer could i perhaps, say, borrow your oc? I was thinking youcould send me her details (history, bio,etc
Guest chapter 21 . 2/12/2013
The story is great.
Keep it up.
The Angel Of Hell's Gates chapter 21 . 1/4/2013
please continue
Vampkitty24 chapter 21 . 8/28/2012
I love this story 3 Really good so far, this is a really good idea and to tell the truth, your OC is not like other OCs. Most tend to be pretty and perfect while yours is creepy and feral, so in short words epic! I really like where your going with this, and I love the whole "emo" look Jared has, first time you described it I cracked up and said "OMG Jared is the emo kid!" XD
Tolazytocomeupwithagoodname chapter 21 . 9/2/2011
Not bad. Not bad at all. I do like this story snd i hope you go on with it but... The girl is a bit if a mary sue. Sorry, but thats only what i think... I might be all wrong for all i know. She just comes off a bit to perfect. Becareful how much you describe charactors too. Dont go on and on saying every little detail.

Over all its a good story and i do like it :3

Sorry if i spelled things wrong, its late and spell check is off
Courtney chapter 21 . 2/13/2011
Please UPDATE as soon as posible I really

Want to find out what happens please UPDATE!
Update chapter 20 . 2/6/2011
God, can't you fucking update?
UPdate chapter 21 . 1/17/2011
can't you update?
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